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*old Minecraft Death noise*Related content
Comments: 13
DandyBandi [2017-09-30 15:23:29 +0000 UTC]
this looks really nice,, is it ok if i can give it a little critism though?
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Strixcaliber In reply to DandyBandi [2017-10-01 02:09:52 +0000 UTC]
sure!Β and thank you
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DandyBandi In reply to Strixcaliber [2017-10-01 15:10:02 +0000 UTC]
ok um so her mouth it lookslike she's smiling/happy maybe like if the edges bent down?
also i think i would make more sense if her other leg was bloody,, i honestly never found it realistic that she would hurt one leg and nothing else though, but if she's laying on her side wouldn't it make more sense that the leg on the top was crushed by the car as opposed to the leg o the bottom?
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Strixcaliber In reply to DandyBandi [2017-10-01 23:52:13 +0000 UTC]
true, thanks for the critique tho
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EvilSnail1 [2017-09-30 03:29:42 +0000 UTC]
I wonder what would happen if, in the next book, the cats are like "screw it" and go to war with a monster, only to find themselves losing despite it not moving at all.
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fluffiefeather [2017-09-30 03:23:02 +0000 UTC]
-clicks art- AWESOME XDDDD
-reads desc- DIE'S OF LAUGHTERΒ Β
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