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StromStrider — Stuck
Published: 2006-03-11 22:06:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 61; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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The smile,Her smile,
Still painted a crossed my mind.
It’s ironic how I now am
Causing my own pain,
By the absences of her’s.
Why?
Why Why Why?
The screaming nagging question echoing
reverberating in the back of my
mind.
Swirling like a dust cloud,
Obscuring all other thoughts.
What caused this to happen?
We were such good friends,
so what caused the falling out?
Betrayal?
Mistrust?
Misleading?
Lies?
All of the above?
I don’t know,
it’s been so long,
all that is left in the tainted emotions
from events long past.
Could I go back,
change the past?
No,
time doesn’t flow that way,
only forward,
moving ever forward.
But how can I?
When half my mind is stuck
on the past,
on her?
TO MANY QUESTIONS!
How to fix it,
fix it,
How to fix,
make things better?
Ask her to talk,
how, when,
I’ve already tired.
I haven’t even decided yet.
Well decide then!
Make a chose,
and make it firm!
No more wishy washy,
get it done,
and now!
How it all ends is in your hands...
(God help us all...)
Think,
and trust in your heart...
Now, make a chose!
Comments: 4
I really enjoyed this piece alotl. the bold really makes this stand out and yell what ur expressing. I feel u did a great job on this and I always look forward to ur submissions
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Thanks a lot! I havn't writen for a while, so I was getting worried you know... but I guess I did ok...
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" It’s ironic how I now am
Causing my own pain,
By the absences of her’s."
awesome. this part really stuck out to me, cause i can somehow identify. but... thats another story.
aside from a few spelling things, its overall a really cool poem. its good visual of mood and emotion, so... cool! keep it up
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Hey thanks! I'm glad that you could assosiate... well, I'm glad that it ment something to you, not that you have to feel that pain... it's killing me...
I always have spelling issues... I type it up in Word and it still has issues... hahahaha!
I'm glad you liked it a lot!
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