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StuartR β€” A Cause
Published: 2005-11-14 18:10:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description I watch them
But they do not watch me
I shoot a man and he falls
His life flows through his fingers
I watch him
Other shots ring out
A staccato battle ebbs and moves around me
I lay down my gun and lay down myself
I watch him
For what did this man die?
His Emperor? His King? His Leader, his Lover?
For what was he killed?
I do not know
I will fight no more until I know for what it is I fight
A woman and two men move rapidly into view
I watch them
They struggle and the woman’s clothes are torn
Abused but not yet used
I have a cause
For this I will fight, and for this I will die
I have a cause
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Comments: 16

Nina16 [2005-11-28 00:15:57 +0000 UTC]

I really like that poem, it is very good for your first post and all

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2005-11-28 10:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks loads

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2005-11-29 16:16:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I like the quote you have there...where's it from?

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2005-11-30 13:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, i got it from a Stephen King book, but i dont know if he made it up himself or what

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2005-11-30 23:14:06 +0000 UTC]

oh, that's cool. i have one -- "Anyone can piss on the floor-be a hero- shit on the ceiling" i don't know if i spelled that right. oh well. The quote is by a friend of mine, or at least i think he made it up.

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2005-12-01 10:18:52 +0000 UTC]

I like that, its good, go your friend!

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2005-12-01 13:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he wrote that on one of my notebooks and my dad saw it and freaked out, he was like.."Get that off of there right now before someone sees it!!" He wasn't to happy when I told him it was there so people COULD see it. lol

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2005-12-04 22:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, well good for you, tis a cool lil thing any ways.

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2005-12-04 23:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know

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evnishen [2005-11-24 21:11:16 +0000 UTC]

this for a first post is brilliant!!
the topic is somehting we should all think about!!
well done!!
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mein herz brennt

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StuartR In reply to evnishen [2005-11-25 13:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and thanks for all your comments

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NegativePenguin [2005-11-20 03:27:47 +0000 UTC]

brilliant imagery, awesome for a first 'post'

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StuartR In reply to NegativePenguin [2005-11-20 12:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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StuartR [2005-11-16 10:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you very much!

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gratzius [2005-11-15 20:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. I really like it.. very powerful and emotional..

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Deylen [2005-11-15 09:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Cool, pity I cant see it though, think this mature filter thing can be turned off at school?

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