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StuartR — Caught Chasing
Published: 2007-08-11 00:17:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Of uncertainty that rose
'Neath my liveried breast
I did try to compose
My swiftly falling chest

And looked not 'pon the men
Gathered at this spot
But at the far distant hem
Of the horizen where we fought

For closing fast it seemed
'Pon this field, 'pon this day
O'er that horizon where i dreamed
Suddenly so very far away.
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Comments: 8

Nina16 [2007-09-08 22:17:35 +0000 UTC]

I really like that poem...I'm not sure why...but it's really good in my opinion!!

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2007-09-15 12:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Garnet-43 [2007-08-21 11:50:21 +0000 UTC]

It artfully sets a mood. Nice work.

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StuartR In reply to Garnet-43 [2007-08-22 13:20:52 +0000 UTC]

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2007-08-11 00:44:35 +0000 UTC]

simple and brief....but very poignant.
well done.

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2007-08-11 01:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you. Thanks for the fave

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BlueEyesCryNoMore In reply to StuartR [2007-08-11 03:55:16 +0000 UTC]

no prob. you're always one of my favourite writers~

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2007-08-12 23:40:31 +0000 UTC]

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