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StuartR — Meaningless?
Published: 2006-02-14 11:22:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description For those of you who dream
Remaining through it all
Allergic to the screams
Grieving at my fall
Ill begotten means
Lighting up my wall
Eaten apart at the seems
Attacked and lost it all
Naked and crouched down
Dependant on that frown
Old before my time
Dilapidated by design
Dead, all yours, and mine
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Comments: 5

Nina16 [2006-02-25 03:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Of forget the rhyming scheme!!! I thought that was wonderful. I love it the way it is!!!!!

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2006-02-25 13:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you very much, and thank you for the faveourite!

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2006-03-04 21:11:08 +0000 UTC]

np

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christines-life [2006-02-15 03:06:18 +0000 UTC]

even though the rhyming scheme was somewhat lost, its still a really good piece!
that happens to me sometimes, don't dwell on it too much

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StuartR In reply to christines-life [2006-02-15 10:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, thanks! Means a lot

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