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StuartR — Memories
Published: 2006-02-19 13:46:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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Description The human clutter contrasts the natural,
Contrasts the old view,
A view destroyed.
The Birds and Trees,
The Police, and no visible Sun.
I stare at my old playground,
A wilderness on my doorstep.
Now but a memory,
So many memories:
A rusty saw,
A quicksand hour,
A tadpole pool,
A solid friendship from an unsure meeting
So many memories,
To many memories
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Comments: 12

Deylen [2006-02-27 13:15:35 +0000 UTC]

'tis cool clap:

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StuartR In reply to Deylen [2006-02-27 15:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Nina16 [2006-02-25 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]

well done. I like it!!!

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2006-02-25 13:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Thankee sia

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2006-03-02 00:09:43 +0000 UTC]

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-24 01:39:43 +0000 UTC]

amazing! i love the repetitive use of memories and the capitalization. c'est magnifique!

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-24 09:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Think th ecapitalizations was accidental, but oh well

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christines-life [2006-02-20 02:07:41 +0000 UTC]

i wish my poems were this good...even since its an old poem.

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StuartR In reply to christines-life [2006-02-20 10:53:19 +0000 UTC]

They are! But thank you for the nice comment

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Darkangel-Drusilla [2006-02-19 19:59:00 +0000 UTC]

v gd xxx

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StuartR In reply to Darkangel-Drusilla [2006-02-19 22:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Darkangel-Drusilla In reply to StuartR [2006-02-20 20:20:02 +0000 UTC]

sok

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