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Description Beauty born in Lifes cupped hand
In moonlit meddows upon demand
Rich in form, with practised voice
Filled with grace, a victim of choice
Masters of their own division
Mastered by anothers decision
Put upon by fear of waste
Looked down upon by those more chaste
Travel far to see within
Trapped without and looking in
More than she i know you all
You know me, but im still standing tall
Im looking up and your looking back
Your a long way way down this winding track
And theres a thousand things for me to say
Upon this, my final day
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Comments: 20

Nina16 [2006-02-25 03:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Bravo!!! I love that!!!!

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StuartR In reply to Nina16 [2006-02-25 13:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And thanks lots for the :fave:

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Nina16 In reply to StuartR [2006-03-02 00:32:19 +0000 UTC]

np you deserve it!!!

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-24 01:20:06 +0000 UTC]

no i dont have msn.........i dont even know what that is, i'm awful with technology and whatnot. sooo yes, even tho my computer is messed up with submitting stuff, i'm having some friends do it, there should be four proses coming soon! and a handful of poems........ttyl!

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-24 12:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh well, but oooh, proses is definately good!

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-23 00:28:24 +0000 UTC]

lol awesome.........you realize we've been commenting on this piece forever? lol. ummm yup so hopefully i can submit some more stuff soon, my computer's been all jacked up lately.

ugh school.........

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-23 10:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeh, are you doing any more prose?? I loved those two pieces! We have been commenting here for ages havent we? Do you have an msn account? You could note me with your ada if you liked...?

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-20 23:14:32 +0000 UTC]

lol i love the rain. i've been told i have a slight accent........i dunno if i do, i was born in the US. but cool! i've been mistaken for someone from wisconsin? lol. i've also had people ask if i have a welsh background people are always surprised when i launch into my i-love-italy rant. lol. soooo yup. enjoy the rain, its good for the soul.

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-21 12:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Weles?! Hehe, quite different from Italy you'd think. I have a mate who's a bit Welsh, im makin up a CD for him now, then off to school

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christines-life [2006-02-20 02:21:12 +0000 UTC]

i really like it.
making it all into one stanza had a neat effect

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StuartR In reply to christines-life [2006-02-21 12:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-19 19:04:14 +0000 UTC]

no i dont really live in italy lol god i wish i did......nah i live in the US. its pretty boring......no cool accents! i wish i lived in europe.

my whole heritage is italian so i might as well live there lol. hows scotland this time of year?

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-19 22:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Scottish accents are horrible for the most part, though i've been told i sound slightly Irish, which is insane, but damn cool! Scotlands... quite rainy. Period.

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-18 18:44:15 +0000 UTC]

lol i'm sure your hair is better than mine seeing as what's on my head looks like nothing i've ever seen in nature......at least on some days lol. we shall be scary haired together.

do you really live in scotland?

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-18 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, well i dunno, you havent seen it! Yep, i live in good ole Scotland, do you really live in Italy?

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BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-18 00:25:55 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks for the comments! that was really nice of you.....i didnt think i looked very good in that pic of me but thanks! i love this piece, especially the trapped without looking in line.



you should put a pic of you on your site! lol its only fair......

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-18 17:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, didn't see that last part, I would put a pic of me on here but i have scary hair, as you can see from my avatar!

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StuartR In reply to BlueEyesCryNoMore [2006-02-18 12:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I quite like it myself (but don't tell anyone i said that... )

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Deylen [2006-02-17 13:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey thats quite cool

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StuartR In reply to Deylen [2006-02-17 13:26:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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