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Published: 2018-04-19 20:55:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 40701; Favourites: 202; Downloads: 0
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Warning: Contains a Gaming character stuffing herself into oblivion.Talon was finally starting to prosper. Their latest plan was a success, with Reaper hunting down and murdering 3 retired Overwatch agents. Things were finally started to look up, and they started to get lax. With everyone else at work, one hacker returned from her mission with a failure. That hackers name was Sombra.
Olivia Colomar, better known as Sombra, was a Talon hacker, though she was mostly following her own goals. Nobody knew about it, though she felt like Gabe and Moira had a hunch about her true intentions.
Tomorrow, at the Takon laboratory:
“There we go.” Moira said as she poured the final ingredient into the test tube. “This should do it. Behold, my latest creation!”
“What exactly is that? Reaper said, and how exactly will it help us beat Overwatch?
“It’s a formula with one small effect, whoever drinks it will be struck with an uncontrollable hunger.” Moira said triumphantly
“And you think that could kill Overwatch how?” Reaper said, doubting that this plan could ever work.
“It’s simple, I hired an old friend of ours to smuggle the liquid in. One drop, and the person who consumes it will be struck with uncontrollable hunger. The body won’t feel full, no matter how stuffed the person is. We can make Overwatch stuff themselves to death!” She says triumphantly. “And the best part is, nobody would suspect us of it, it would all be Overwatch’s fault!
“However, this test tube is only the beta version of my current project. We need a test subject. Someone who we know is against us.
“I think I know the perfect candidate....” Reaper said with a large smile on his face.
“Dios Mio, I’m starving!” Sombra said as she headed back to her room. “Is there anything a girl can have after all my hard work?” She opened the door, and was surprised to see Moira and Reaper standing inside, holding a small bag of cookies.
“Hey Sombra.” Moira said, trying her best to smile and look friendly. “We thought you would be hungry, so here, take these cookies!”
“Gracias!” Sombra said as Reaper and Moira left the room, the door slamming behind them. “Let’s see how good these are!”
She takes a small bite, her makeup-covered lips closing around the cookie. At once, her eyes widen in delight. “Wow, this is amazing!” She says joyfully.”
She immediately starting digging into the bag as quickly as she can, stuffing herself full with cookie after cookie.
She was spraying crumbs all over the place, making an absolute hog of herself. However, Sombra didn’t care. She just wanted more.
She was down to the last cookie in less than 5 minutes. “That was-URP! muy delicioso.....” She says, rubbing her stomach.
She then felt another rumble in her stomach. “I’m still hungry? But how?” She asked as she dialed the com line to the kitchens.
“Hello, Sombra here, I was wondering if you bring some more food up. Bring as much as you can!”
The chefs immediately starting cooking as much food as they could possibly muster, while Reaper and Moira were watching through the Comms.
The chefs finally brought the food up to Sombra’s room. They was every wonderful dinner food that you could ever dream of, Sombra’s mouth started to water from the thought of eating it all. “Gracias! Now let’s eat!” She says, digging into a chicken leg, devouring it as quickly as she could, she then moved on to the breast, throwing the leg bone aside. However, as she ate, she didn’t notice her stomach starting to grow, pushing against her shirt.
“Hic! Oh my god, this is amazing!” She says as she finished off the chicken and moves on to a set of ribs in the corner.
She keeps stuffing herself, her outfit growing tighter and tighter as it struggles to contain her growing stomach.
“Màs, màs!” Sombra yelled as she continues to stuff more and more ribs down her gullet. Her breasts also started pushing against her costume, as if they were growing too.
“This is...UUUURRRPP...amazing!” Sombra says as she begins eating her way through a bowl of stuffing. Foregoing cutlery, she shoves her face straight into it, not knowing that with every bite she takes, her stomach pushes her shirt up higher and higher.
“Hic! I need more food! She says, as she’s almost finished with the entire table. She takes one bite of the last chicken remaining, which finally pushes her clothing to it’s limit. Her costume rips in 2, her large bronze belly pushing out from the middle, and her 2 breasts, overflowing her bra, ripping out the top of her shirt.
“Oh!” She yelled, surprised by how much she’s already eaten. She looks behind her, and notices that her ass is pushing over the sides of the chair.
“Dinner was great, now for a snack!” She says, her lack of clothing not overcoming her hunger. “25 pizzas please, and make it snappy!” She yells over the intercom to the chefs.
Later, stack after stack of pizza boxes were shoved through the door. Sombra, rubbing her overstuffed belly, came to intercept them as soon as possible.
She proceeded to shove slice after slice down her throat, her bra and panties growing tighter with each 3 slices consumed.
She moaned as her bra squeezed her oversized breasts, among with how her panties were squeezing her stomach, which was protruding from her like she swallowed a beach ball.
“GULP!” Another box of pizza was finished, and Sombra was not looking good, her stomach had starting to tighten up, but she still continued gulping the food down.
She started to slow down on the 5th box, with what was left of her underwear was growing painfully tight. With one more slice of pizza, her bra blasted off, her oversized tits bouncing onto her stomach, causing her to go into a burping frenzy.
With another slice, her panties ripped in half. With nothing holding it back, her ass overflowed over the chair.
10 boxes later, Sombra was finally at her limit. The outside of her stomach was a light red, her breasts were leaked, and her naked body was covered in food. However, moaning and groaning with her stomach, Sombra was rhythmically shoving more and more food down her throat. Her stomach looked like an overblown yoga ball, stretched to its absolute limit.
“Hic! I’m so...URP...full, why can’t I stop eating?” She groaned as she shoves the final slice of the 24th pizza down her throat. She was more food than person at this point, with her bronze belly overtaking the rest of her body, littered with stretch marks and groaning like crazy.
She slowly started shoving the first slice down her throat. “Only 9 slices left, and I’ll be done, she thought as she pushed it past her plump, overblown lips. She wouldn’t stop until everything was finished.
Her stomach groaned and she felt a burst of pain as 7 more slices entered her Yoga-ball sized stomach. There was only one slice left, Sombra’s stomach was blood red. Her hair scattered across her face, with her breasts and bloated cheeks covering most of her once/beautiful face.
She held the last slice up to her mouth with a shaky hand, and devoured it with a sickening gulp. It disappeared into her stomach, and another noise started to rise up. She heard a large creaking noise, and watched as her stomach started to grow even further, her belly button popping out from all the pressure. “Too..much...Fucking...food, she says as her eyes roll up into her head, and her body surges out one more time before...
BANG!
Her stomach burst with a tremendous eruption, her eyes rolling into her head as the room was splattered with her half-digested meal. Sombra was now splattered all over the walls, and the video feed cut off. Reaper and Moira smiled, knowing that the experiment was a success. Now to move on to Overwatch.......
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Comments: 6
Brubake [2018-05-14 04:06:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i loved it, great read. Awesome, one less hacker. Although a description of her before stuffing figure/face would of made this perfect.
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TheNeverWere [2018-04-27 15:30:18 +0000 UTC]
Not a bad go.
My tips as a viewer as someone who looks out for this kind of stuff:
Length - longer is better, but that doesn't mean include fluff! Pad out your sections so it doesn't seem like things are going from zero to sixty out of nowhere. For example (The chefs immediately starting cooking as much food as they could possibly muster, while Reaper and Moira were watching through the Comms.
The chefs finally brought the food up to Sombra’s room. They was every wonderful dinner food that you could ever dream of, Sombra’s mouth started to water from the thought of eating it all) that all happens pretty fast. Theres no room to breathe or contemplate anything with the newly introduced change either between those that infected and sombra herself, and fetish fic or not its still a story so pacing means a lot!
Second - descriptions. The dreaded show don't tell. This goes with length; having the audience see or metaphorically feel the expansion and atmosphere (mood/tenstion).
For example: With another slice, her panties ripped in half. With nothing holding it back, her ass overflowed over the chair.
could become: Those plump purple lips greedily welcomed another piece, feeling the cheese slither in like all the others. With every bite the pressure grew not just her stomach where the pressure and weight already was a strain for her sitting up, but a new sensation that appeared around her ass. A sharp pinching surrounded her although dulled by her hunger, grew in rhythm with every swallow until-
SNAP
A moment and the strain was gone still barely noted by the gorging hacker. With a moan, both from satisfaction from her and in stress from her chair, each brown plump cheek she sat on pushed past their boundaries and started to envelop the seat as well.
Sound better? It sure helps make the story longer and give the event a bit more personality.
That said, the Mei one has a bit more of a problem compared to this story with the same issues brought up. All that said, don't be afraid to make it a story than a quick kink dump! Thats what we are looking for and want~!
And if you need some help trying to get into a frame of mind, think of adding horror elements! By that I mean unsettle the reader a little because believe it or not, I think this kink pairs better with that than most other genres.
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stupidcat208 [2018-04-20 14:37:43 +0000 UTC]
^ These two know what they're talking about, and have given me all the advice that I know, so I'm sure it's going to be repetitive, but once again, fantastic start, you don't *Bloat* the story with too much description and it's *Stuffed* with good writing, watch your positives and negatives as I think a few times they get crossed.
I HAVE played Overwatch, which gives me enough insight to say that I feel like this story could be anyone, but using pre-existing characters saves you time on description as people already know what they look like, but the actual actions of them don't feel especially like the characters, in the scenario though, it doesn't particularly matter, fan fiction can have them acting however they like so, the point is moot.
Overall, it's way better than when I started and you've got a really good talent for this, hope to see more from you!
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PennaKiteWeather [2018-04-20 01:59:45 +0000 UTC]
For a first time story, I think it's got all the necessary elements for any bursting fan to enjoy. All the details centered around the body are easily conveyed enough to see, though maybe it runs through these depictions a little quicker than some would expect. Some of the figurative language mixed in was refreshing to read ("She was more food than person at this point") in between.
Any bursting story can sort of feel formulaic - following a noticeable pattern - when it utilizes the same plotline, in this case of a character overeating. While I'm not quite familiar with the characterization Overwatch has developed (to be more specific, I stopped playing before Sombra or Moira were introduced, and only know some about Reaper), the plan hatched without a hitch; chefs were at the ready, just the right amount of food was dropped in arm's reach for Sombra to overdo it with the final bite, and conveniently she didn't realize the danger until it was too late, thanks to an equally-convenient potion. Developing a gameplan to use canon characters in unique ways is one of the challengers for all writers. In the end, it's tough to establish when the real matter is to see people fill up and burst. Putting a creative spin on a scenario comes with several tries.
Please keep at it!
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Stuffedwaves In reply to PennaKiteWeather [2018-04-20 12:08:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I’ll put your advice towards the next story!
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HurtMe-Plenty [2018-04-19 22:37:42 +0000 UTC]
A good start. I’ve never played Overwatch so a lot of the characters and set up went over my head, hence I can’t give critique on that, but there’s a few things I can offer.
be careful of reusing the same metaphors: you refer to her belly as being yoga ball sized a few times, which seems oddly specific. Maybe just refer to it’s size in more generalised terms, or it’s look to something spherical (moons, etc). You could possibly spend a bit more time talking about her physically, add a bit of detail to her body and such here and there.
That being said, you do do a good job of not letting your descriptions get in the way of your telling the story, which is a great skill to have. Took me ages to learn to do that. Nice work!
Thanks for sharing this, I look forward to more from you
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