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Infinity-Bacon [2014-11-17 22:00:21 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! I was browsing things I should critique today, and yours came up! Now, for a beginner's work, this is not bad! Very good, actually! However, there are some things that you may need to work on a little bit, now don't get mad, because everyone does need practice to get better! It doesn't matter your age, gender, race, anything! The proportions are a little bit off compared to real animals, and the positioning of the limbs is also a little off, but that's alright! That is the main reason that I draw mostly anthro and manga. The posing of the limbs is also a bit off, the paw that the dog is using to point should not be facing up, as anatomy does not work that way. The positioning of the ears looks as if they are right next to each other rather than one closer to you than the other. My suggestions are to practice, practice, practice! You will get better as time goes on, I know it! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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CPTdraws [2014-11-18 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

err... how old are you? just wondering....

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