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Subtranslucent — Castaway
Published: 2007-02-10 15:06:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description paste me

in that book of                    

dreams


I long to

live there

again--don't


wipe the glue

that seeps

from behind

my smile


you can almost

see my     

future



nearly feel

my potential

if I had any


but I  don't


I am adrift

in stormy

memory


of what was

or could

have been


afloat

in your

subconscience  


below memories

of others


castaway


yet--I long

to live there

again


in your

book of

dreams


beyond

the shadows

before

the pain


when I

used

to be


somebody


©2001,2007subtranslucent
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Comments: 6

Corpse-Warrior [2007-09-26 17:22:12 +0000 UTC]

This poem is sublime. Breath taking. The writing is beautiful.

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Subtranslucent In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2007-09-26 21:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. much appreciated

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Corpse-Warrior In reply to Subtranslucent [2007-09-26 21:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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Orchid-Black [2007-02-12 05:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Ach... your poetry brings tears to my eyes. It is achingly beautiful. It is your soul.

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Subtranslucent In reply to Orchid-Black [2007-09-26 21:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll reply to you here as well, but as I have always said to you -- Thank you -- Thank you -- Thank you

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Orchid-Black In reply to Subtranslucent [2007-10-02 07:35:37 +0000 UTC]

... You're welcome -- You're welcome -- You're welcome.

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