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Published: 2008-01-03 00:51:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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clouds covermy eyes
blot out the sun
blot out the light
I close my eyes
to see
to be
to live
I will open them
when the cold
seeps in
and know
youβre here
in the dark;
in the bitter cold
of our hearts
when you
touch me
and I
shudder
lovingly
Β©2007-2008subtranslucent
Comments: 6
Corpse-Warrior [2008-01-12 19:26:44 +0000 UTC]
I like this piece, it is subtle yet potent.
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Subtranslucent In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2008-01-23 17:27:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I appreciate that.
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Corpse-Warrior In reply to Subtranslucent [2008-01-24 13:27:27 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome
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Orchid-Black In reply to Subtranslucent [2008-05-12 16:20:45 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome.
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Orchid-Black [2008-01-04 03:22:46 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful as well. But then, you knew that already...
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