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Published: 2008-01-03 00:51:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description clouds cover
my eyes
blot out the sun
blot out the light

I close my eyes
to see
to be
to live

I will open them
when the cold
seeps in
and know

you’re here
in the dark;
in the bitter cold
of our hearts

when you
touch me
and I
shudder
lovingly

Β©2007-2008subtranslucent
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Comments: 6

Corpse-Warrior [2008-01-12 19:26:44 +0000 UTC]

I like this piece, it is subtle yet potent.

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Subtranslucent In reply to Corpse-Warrior [2008-01-23 17:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I appreciate that.

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Corpse-Warrior In reply to Subtranslucent [2008-01-24 13:27:27 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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Subtranslucent [2008-01-04 04:29:28 +0000 UTC]

aww.. thanks

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Orchid-Black In reply to Subtranslucent [2008-05-12 16:20:45 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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Orchid-Black [2008-01-04 03:22:46 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful as well. But then, you knew that already...

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