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SubukuNoJess β Drinks at a Diner RP Error
Published: 2012-12-29 14:37:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 6016; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 8
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Another error message while I'm trying to write stories and do my unfinished artwork. I was kind of inspired by my Glowing Foods Message and some of the other RP errors out there to come up with this. This one seems more easier to read.In this scenario, I will be the waitress that serves you the drink. If you want to switch roles, I will be the customer and you suggest which drink I should have and what should happen.
Here are the choices:
"Mystical Moon Juice"- A purple colored juice in a glass that has such a beautiful reflection that you might be looking at the moon itself. It tastes just like fruit punch. This drink makes you grow into a powerful/magical giant or giantess and might change your mindset. May or may not contain vore, rampage, etc.
"Frosty Hot Cocoa"- Basically a nice hot chocolate in a large mug filled with whipped cream, marshmallows, snowflake-shaped sprinkles, your favorite toppings, and a cherry on top, making a great winter chocolate treat. This drink causes you to shrink down to size. The waitress (me) will have to take care of you.
"Sparkling Apple Cider"- A drink especially made for the new year, it's apple cider with a surprising fizz and bubble to it. Just like the 'sparkle' in the drink, anything could happen to you; growth, shrink, vore, etc. along with a transformation to any being you want as long as it has some human qualities to it. Anything goes choice, just tell me what should happen.
I hope you all enjoy this latest one~
~Jess
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Frosty hot cocoa
name:bryan keogh
gender:male
age:15
height:6β1β
extra notes no mature or even nsfwΒ
i will shrink to 2 inches tall
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Frosty hot cocoa
character desc:
name: Nicholas (Nick) Wood
gender: male
age: 15
height: 5β3β
extra notes:
no mature or NSFW
i will shrink to 2 inches tall
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I can do this with ya if you want
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Im a male, my name is "John Labrek" and ill have the hot cocoa
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I'll be a female, her name is Voria, she's normally 7 feet 5 inches tall, and she'll be getting Mystical Moon Juice. If this rp is still open, that is.
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will you be playing a female?
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ok ill start) a very young handsome young man walks up to the table
"ma'am what would you like to drink tonight?" he says in a kind voice with a smile
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(I love the sound of this, you are awesome at making these. ive wanted to try this for a longtime so when ever you are able to itd be cool to start this.
and id love some frosty hot cocoa 
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(If you'd like we can RP, I choose the Frosty Hot Cocoa.)
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(May I please? Frosty Hot Cocoa please? )
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Can you play a female
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So my idea is that it does the same thing the coco does but it's temporary
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Ill start)
I brink out the apple sider to a cute teenage girl
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*I take it n I thank u then take a sip*
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All of a sudden you shrink your a few inches tali come out and lift you up and swallow you
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(Please dont do y and u and stuff like that try to atlest be a little detaled
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((As my Star Fox oc Kyle. A obese male of Krystal's species, he has an appetite beyond imagination. He wears a very small shirt and booty shorts. Also, I don't do notes)) Apple Cider ma'am
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Sparkling apple cider? Sounds interesting...
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Haven't I met you before?
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Idk
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I see you haven't improved your english at all.
I'm sorry to say this, but I'm not going to RP with you.
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Wtf I haven't even done anything you ass! I mean, WTF, GIVE PEOPLE A CHANCE FIRST
AND GRAMMAR SHOULD'NT MATTER ITS HAVING FUN YOU IDIOT
YOU DON'T NEED TO HAVE GREAT GRAMMAR TO HAVE FUN
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*sigh* You already did something: Show your crippled english. Grammar is one of the most important parts of english, and you seem to show that you're not good at it at all.
There are lots of RPers that specifically state that you need to have good grammar, otherwise you'll be ignored.
Also, I judge RPers based on how well they type. If it's excellent, it brings my hopes up, and I might think that they are excellent at RPs, with detailed explanations, and the will to keep going. However, when it's badly typed, I'll suspect the RPer as some kid who just discovered what RPs are, and just keep all their replies under 5 words in a context-less, unfinished sentence. That's what drives me mad from the inside.
If you really want to RP with me, so I can see what you REALLY are, you must improve your english. Not everyone can correct an error.
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Bro just because om not thenmost detailed doesn't mean it no fun
AB AS I SAID BEFORENI CAN DO GRAMMER NOT AR ALL
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Please spellcheck your posts. This was what I was talking about your crippled english.
By the way, I judge an RP's fun factor based on how good the RPer is, how long his replies are, how detailed he can be, and how perfect the english is. You clearly failed the third one before we even began.
Also, you're not even the one who made this RP Error, so you probably don't even know how this RP is supposed to work.
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Iv had rps go on for about a year once
I dripped it because it got boring(snd the guy posted three replys ever day then left and i do spell check there was nothjng wrong with the ladt one you
Moron
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From reading this reply you just posted, it doesn't look like you used a spellcheck at all.
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