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Published: 2009-05-04 23:01:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 8074; Favourites: 739; Downloads: 198
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---- Moved to scraps. Yes, I'm crazy. But I see too many things that need to be fixed!Any feedback on how to improve it more would be very helpful.
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One thing that catches my eye - I get the feeling that I'm looking down at her from above - she's laying down on something on her back - and the pooling of hair hair supports this perspective. But when you move down to the skirt of her dress, it looks like it would if she were standing up - it's just going straight. If she were laying down, the fabric of her skirt would settle around her, slightly showing the outlines of her hips and thighs. So maybe if you made some contours - slight modeling, it would help the perspective be cohesive. All said and done, it's a gorgeous piece. Good job hun.
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Absolutely beautiful! The hands at the top are a little hard to see, though.
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This is very beautiful. The only thing I would fix would be the nose, it seems to flat to me. Also, I think her eyes need to be a bit more in focus, they look as if she's blankly staring right now.
But other than that, gorgeous!
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oh this is so amazing, and those hands are soo creepy!!
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i love eeeverything about it <3 the only thing i'd say is her nose...the tooop part where it connects the the eyebrows and in between the eyes. it makes her look odd.
but i Looove it ^_^
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THIS IS AMAZING!!!! i absolutly love this! i cant wait to see it done!
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fuck(excuse my french) what everyone says about this picture! this is so awesome and pretty...i dont think you need 2 improve nothing!!
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AWESOME! I like it a lot but i have some suggestions. You don't have to listen to me if you don't want to, I'm no pro but you could try a hand going for the neck and the hand on the right looks as if it only wants to touch her not actually drag her down. Everything else looks beautiful to me, specially the dress.
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Oh, i forgot, AMAZING job on the hair. I've got my 
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It's wonderful! Beautiful! The only thing I can think of his mabe put somemore hairs... out of place? I guess
But it's already amazing!
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Sarah, you liar! This is gorgeous! Sheesh. I don't see the mistakes I guess. It's rather creepy, but the girl and her dress make it amazing.
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this is great but i personally think that you should change the shade of the hands and make them stand out a bit more, at first glance they're pretty hard to see and i also think that the hair is a bit too curly but thats just me >.>
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the only thing to change - please, make the dark hands stand out more. they are barely noticeable at first sight.
except this - awesome! much better than previous entry!
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As a few of them said, the only thing i could see that could use improving is the hands. Yhey're pretty dark and blend in with the dark part of the grass. Maybe highlight/trace them with blue or something like that?
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It looks beautiful. The only thing I see is that the hands are a little dark and are hard to see. You might want to put some more highlight on them. Other that, it's amazing!
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are you kidding? there's nothing that needs fixing that i can see!!
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What the hell!!! this can not be scraps, this is better than all my gallery hahaha
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the hands Are Black But highlight with a little of Gray or something to bring them out but overall it's great!
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I think it looks really awesome I love the hair and the dress design
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Looks great! but i think the hands are a bit too dark, cant really see them.
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I think this is just lovely. The detail is wonderful and I like your shading and painting technique a lot. In my opinion the colors are a bit dark, though.
Apart from that, really lovely piece!
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the hands don't seem to be a part of the picture, they look almost phtoshopped in...i don't know, maybe that's just me, but other than that it's looking wonderful.
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really pretty, but theres something in the face that look wrong to the rest. The nose...I donΒ΄t know exactly what it is but theres something that disrupt me. And maybe if it was possible she would look better with closed eyes, so that it looks like she sleep or something like this. Maybe a few Highlights would look great in the hair.
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Incredible, I love your drawing style 
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This is a very beautiful picture.
But the dress seems very stiff..straight
to me..almost like she ISN'T laying down..
it's too perfect..do you get what I mean?
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lol what defects? If that's full of defects than my art is riddled with HOLES. I don't see any mistakes. As they say we are our own worst critics. But I think this piece is beautiful. I don't suppose you could tell me how you did those small little tufts of green... grass?... light? behind her. And how on earth did you get her hair to look like that?!
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This is beautiful! Why is it in scraps?
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personally i don't see anything wrong with it. maybe you could brighten up the edges slightly to make the hands more visible, but i really like it how it is.
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it s beautiful DONT the space between her eyes her nose seems aliitle too square
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i dont see anything wrong with it
looks absolutely fantabulously perfect to me! XD
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looks fantastic!
but I think the "evil" hands are too dark.
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Waw! Beautiful!
Feed back? Hem... I'm not very good with technic of drawing in Photoshop, so I can't critic the technic, but I have a good eye for proportion, and... may be the hands of the lady are too big for his tiny body. Also, may be make slimmer the nose as high as eyebrows, but it is my opinion. More light for see better the evil hands?
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OH GAWD I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE HER DRESS!!! her locket is awesome!! i love her locket!! soo shiny!!
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WOW I can not help but to always say the you inspire me to learn Photoshop, thank you for that. Your work is so beautiful and it always look so magical. I love this piece, i know you might have meant for her to be lying on grass or something but I looks like if she is drifting away from evil. I really like it but to me it is a little to dark especially around the edges.
GOOD LUCK in the contest
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This is amazing!
The only things I noticed were that her left eye, eyebrow included (on the right side) is slightly smaller than her other eye and that the creepy black hands were a bit too hard to see...
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the hands, the nose and the left eye (on her) are all a bit off......
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I don't think she looks cross eyed, but her hair seems a bit weird. Well, it might be just me, I just got up
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