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Published: 2005-04-16 06:28:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description My mind is all over the place,
My heart is a mess.
She doesn't know what I
dream about.
A rose, a mango,
These things come to mind.
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I cried yesterday,
I'm not sure exactly why...
Maybe because I have
dreams that are never real
and I'm back where I started
and my feet have never left the ground.
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Comments: 6

liesnlove [2005-10-07 03:38:29 +0000 UTC]

i really should read your stuff properly, may i ask..why mango??
i love raw peotry...you certainly do have a way with words, but you knew that already didn't you?? you need to write more

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Sumyungi In reply to liesnlove [2005-10-07 10:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Mangos are a tasty fruit, but they have a stone heart.

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liesnlove In reply to Sumyungi [2005-10-08 06:39:58 +0000 UTC]

woh...okay you just managed to turn a piece of fruit into something more...complicated...nice

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NikiP [2005-08-15 15:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Firstly i liked it form mirrored content which is especially difficult to do well. You seem, on the face of things, to have a flare for raw unplanned poetry.

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Alienstar [2005-04-19 04:36:31 +0000 UTC]

beautifull... I love the last lines especially.
must fav

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MemoryFinder [2005-04-16 06:30:02 +0000 UTC]

thats really cool... the structure and the almost absent-mindedness of the piece... awesome

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