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Huge file is huuuuge!
Anyway here's the fifth page of my fancomic Traveller. I was actually originally supposed to submit this already a week ago, but what you know RL got the best of me. I had slept so little last weekend that I looked like a panda bear
I've been extremely stressed about things - mainly concerning my lorry, because without it my life becomes really empty since I can't take my horse to any competitions nor trainings. 
But back to the subject of this comic! This page doesn't really take the story whole lot forward, but I'm still learning so I don't know what kinda pacing is good for a comic. I also put four panels in this one, which is breaking the rule I've had so far with three panels.
Also perspectives! I has them, well sorta
I don't think I got them quite right, but I keep on trying anyway 
I also think that some of the colors on this page are quite good actually :3Anyway, I hope I can make the next part quicker, since it's the Easter holidays here in Finland and the next time I have to go to the work is on Tuesday. Though I've got some other art ideas too, but I guess I just need to put things into and order
So stay tuned for the next exciting episode of Dragonball Z page of Traveller!
Edit: OMG I noticed some shit in the pic just now and I had to fix it. I blame energy drinks for that D:
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Prowl: Jazz...stop rubbing it in his face....
Jazz likes to take thing seriously x}
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: noes: Red Alert is innocent!
.............
For whatever he's accused of.
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Or is he?
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Hah, as always, you just gotta be weird XD
Man, I'm sorry for not commenting on this before, but just by leaving my messages alone a couple of days, everything drowns and dissapears D:
Anyways, it looks awesome!! Still, the lineless art and everything, man it gotta be hard. I laughed out loud at the end, that's really an awesome joke XD
I can't wait to see what Red is gonna do!
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Yep, it would be boring in the normal way
I'm drowning under messages at the moment as well so I know the feeling D:
Thank you for the compliment 
You'll see what happens when I get around doing the next part(I went and promised to get it done this week, but I had an entrance exam to university today and will have another tomorrow, so we'll see...) D:
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Always put life (and especially exams) first. I might be jumpy, but DA are mostly patient watchers XD
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I'm glad that I was able to do that
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lmao. This one is just priceless, between Red's panic, an overly-giddy Jazz, and the sexy Prowl.
Why is one of Jazz's doorwings laying almost flat across his back?
back to gmail. Yay for having time!
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Haha!
Uuuugh... I had hope that nobody would have noticed D: I tried a completely new perspective and failed at it
I would answer the email right away, but I really need to hit the sack XD
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Ha!
Even seasoned artist have trouble with prospective.
No worries. I finally had time to sit down. Well, sorta. I forgot about all the "Happy Easter" phone calls that would interrupt. Meh, still finished it after like 3 hours >.<
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Literally or metaphorically? ;D
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hahaha XDDD poor Red Alert XDDD he is always a victim here XD
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He kinda makes it easy to victimize him
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hahaha XDD oh yeah, that's a great reazon XDDDD
it's like when you goes to take Gears and his whining or Huffer with his negativity XDDDD
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The perspective is a little skewed, especially in the first panel when Prowl enters the house and you can see the outside. The position vanishing point in the first panel is quite clear, but he's too close to the viewer, the street between the houses narrows too quickly.
However, I applaud you for choosing such a difficult angle! I'm also quite fond of the lineless, painterly style, although the mangaesque faces, which are defined with bold, black lines, sort of don't fit in. Although I wouldn't know how to paint a Transformer's mouth, either ... (is the metal/whatever it is that their face is made out of elastic? Oh well)
All I do is complain, I know. I'm sorry, you're my bro.
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Thank you for the crit
This is all a learning process and comments like this will help me to learn more things :3
The mangaesque faces are something I'm really ashamed of and I'm trying to work my way out of them. I need to do more RL studying on humans and so I can get rid of doing them. Currently that is the only way I know how to do a face D: Oh god it's so embarrassing XD
Though what it comes to their mouths, that is the only way they are drawn in every Transformers continuity except for the movieline and I'm not even bad! Some official artists give them luscious lips too
Giving concrit isn't complaining. You, more than anybody else should know that! :3
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Oh goodie! Glad to help.
Drawing portraits does miracles, as does observing people. After some practice, "it flow naturally"
Oh God not the luscious lips - I will never forget TF:Animated Optimus Prime's... how to put that, erotically disturbing mouth.
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Yep! And I'm hoping that I can put more thought into that in the future :3
TFA isn't the only one with luscious lips. Just look at this [link] and the artist (Nick Roche) does similar kinds of lips on pretty much every TF, but Overlord just kinda has taken the icing on the cake
I'm not really fan of making that kinda lips on a Transformers, because I think it's just silly and unnecessary
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Oh sweet baby Jesus
that's hot
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I know right?
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Fanart doesn't count!
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An Prowl meant literally rubbing it in his face...
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Except, are you entirely sure?
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uhh... uhhh...
DONTLOOKATME. *hides*
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Yep
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Yes XD
But I like the background. Good job ^^
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OMG!! That's epic cute!!
Especially 3,4pannel. Rubbing paper on Red!! XXXDDD
Jazz's facial expression looks also pricless!
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Haha! Thank you!
Jazz is being silly there - he probably got a bit too carried away
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It really is
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*snort*... oh yeah, our sweet Jazz can be just silly sometimes... that's why I love him =w= 
and what will be of any comic with out a paranoid quote from RED?
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Yep, he's silly alright
I couldn't resist putting that classic in there, because like you said, it wouldn't be anything without at least one paranoid quote from him
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hahahaha
yay! for silly jazz and paranoid Red!
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Well who else it could have been? Prowl is made for the role
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♥ + XD
Well, I really love the smoothness of your comic! C: And I think you're getting better and better at this! *_*
The glass of their doorwings is awesome! *_*
And I love Prowl's statement, Jazz's exrpression and Red's reaction! xD
Lovely and funny, as always! ♥
*Clo, keeping Grimlock company outside*
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Thank you sweetie :3 It would be awesome if I kept improving all the time, because imagine how good I would be after I've dealt with this series
Their doorwing glass is so shiiineh
I'm glad I could get some lols outta you
Keep on keeping him company, so he won't go on a rampage and destroy the whole town
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