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Published: 2015-12-27 02:21:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 531; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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FINALLY FINISHED THIS.Only a week overdue :'D I'll try not to let it happen again.
Poor Stanley. must me depressing to die over. and over. and over. But hey, that portal looks new!
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If I may ask, what ending is this? (Luv it doe!)
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It's the Suicide Ending, where Stanley kills himself by jumping off the platform
(sorry it's so poorly illustrated, this is old as heck)
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OHHHH MAN. I got so excited when I saw this in my inbox. :'D Thank you so much for working on this, despite life being so crazy!
Maybe I can get the next one done before I leave. x'D
I have a question, though. (I just woke up, so sorry if I'm completely overlooking something. xD) What's in the 2nd panel? I think it's the room, but I'm not sure which part? (Do you have a screenshot I could see?) Help me, looking at scenery is so much harder than looking at characters. And is he falling on purpose--or accident?
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I'm glad you like it! I'm just so glad I got it seems xD
also in the second panel he's supposed to be looking up at the platform he has to jump off of. I'm sorry I'm reaaally bad at perspective
also, I guess he doing it reluctantly. Like, he doesn't want to, but he know he has to in order to move on with the game
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Ohhh okay. I guess it's hard for me to see that--but I wouldn't take it too personally, because my brain has a weird way of making optical illusions out of... Um... Everything. Everybody else will see a butterfly in an inkblot, and I'll see a knight fighting a space-alien dragon with sixty legs.
Ohh, okay. I wasn't sure. x'D
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I was afraid people wouldn't be able to tell what it was anyway x'D
hopefully i'll get better at this as the pages go on
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Hm... That's a cool thought. O_O By the time this is done, we'll both probably be infinitely better at drawing comics, poses, expressions--scenery--how to portray something happening. 8D
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yeah! Improvement awaits...
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