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Published: 2016-04-28 03:36:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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IT'S FINALLY DONE.Oh man, there are a couple things that I wanna fix here but I'll get them done later cause it's late and I'm supposed to be and bed and holy crap I actually finished this
Though for the record, this is probably the best page I've done so far. I'm getting less lazy with coloring and I had a ton of fun drawing it
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O no, thar in troubls now.
I love how Chell is just kind of: "I KNEW this would happen..." while Stanley's like: "Um--um--uhhhh, should I stop them, or...?"
Also, I really like that second panel. >: D
Aaand I laughed at 'BRITISH GASP'.
I hate to be a critic, but you misspelled some stuff. 'Exuse me' should be 'excuse me', and 'business' is definitely not spelled like 'buisness'.
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Lol I had a lot of fun drawing their expressions xD my favorite panel is panel four B)
Oh man sorry about that, it was super late when I wrote the dialog and I was half asleep. Also I used MS paint to paste the words in, which doesn't have spell check. I'll fix it as soon as possible.
I guess this is why we called it "Poor Writing"
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"Come on, Stanley."
Stanley: *Shiny blush*
Really, does your art program not let you add words? That's weird. o_o I'd recommend ALWAYS typing in your dialogue into something that has a spellcheck, before pasting it into the comic. That's what I do. Please don't be offended, but you make typos REALLY often and I've just never wanted to tell you.
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Yeah, one thing about Sai is that is doesn't allow you to add text, and that sucks.
Yeah, yeah I know.
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Huh. That's a weird thing for an art program to lack. o_o You can always add the text in with FireAlpaca, right? Unlike Paint, it allows you to actually move the text around AFTER placing it, instead of just placing a permanent piece of text. x'D Also, in general it's just a LOT easier to manipulate text in FireAlpaca.
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