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Supach — A Tale of Toadstool Forest
Published: 2016-03-26 18:51:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1463; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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Another collaboration with fellow deviant Alina Kurbiel. Please check out her wonderful Art page PeekingVerses are all limericks. Enjoy! D
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You're a very talented woman, dear Suzanne.
A great collaboration.
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Had fun reading this, awesome collaboration, keep them coming.
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Oh ha ha 
Have fun
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You write very well, with your heart and soul.
Sie schreiben sehr gut, mit ihre herz und seele.
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Thank you, you´re so kind. I have only been writing for about 2 1/2 years since I lost my husband. I felt the need to share my grief, the collaborations came as Alina contacted me and sent me her paintings. I think this one was the first and that brought me on to other things and thoughts. I realised I love writing for children
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Well good for you, I really like your poem that you wrote for your late husband, sorry to hear of your loss. I wrote this fav.me/d2qi4qy for the loss of dear relatives of mine.
My first poem comes from 2008, I had to find my methods of writing then and now I still experiment, but have steadier line in my writings. I have only one poem for children fav.me/d4i7eus
I'm not really good at it, but I can write my frustrations and thoughts away with it. And sometimes help someone else on the line.
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Thank you for your kind words. My writing helps me tremedously to come to terms with my sorrow it´s like sharing my grief with a good friend... Me. One who understands exactly what i am going through and I have received so much feed back from wonderful people who tell me that my poem brought them comfort and this helps me too.
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Exactly the same feelings here. Thank you for the
It's important that we can do this, for our own, but also for other people who indeed can find comfort in it.
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Btw My husband was also a big Iron Maiden fan, I think he must have every album they ever made in his collection. Now I have them
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Awesome, you could by the new album, which is a great album, also for none metalheads. To keep the collection complete.
I'm gonna see them for the 27th time this June in the Gelredome in Arnhem.
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Yes they are, they have done so much for with their music, kept me going and/or strong for almost 30 years.
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The text needs some formatting work, otherwise this is a cute little story.
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The edit looks much better.
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I thought a limerick rhythm went AA BB A but I am no profi so if you tell me otherwise I´ll be willing to listen..
Glad you like it though
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They do, but in the illustration they are not formatted that way, which made harder to read. I'm also impressed you wrote so many without once using "there once was a blank from...". I've such a hard time with that.
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Oh ha ha ha 
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Its still a larger departure than mine!
There once was a boy named Pete,
Who liked to do tricks in the street.
He jumped up in the air
And meet a buss there
And now Pete is part of the street.
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Oh my I nearly spluttered my tea all over my computer keyboard reading this so funny
Flawed Nursery RhymeOld mother Hubbard,
bought herself a skateboard
and on her first ride down the street.
It looked like she was coping
but the whole time she was hoping
that she would land on her feet.
Now accidents can happen
but when she started flappin
her arms like two sticks of wood.
The people began staring
cos somehow she was scaring,
all the dogs in the neighbourhood
Poetry by Suzanne Karbach
3rd December 2015. try this one it´s sort of limerick style too
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Thank you
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Oh so happy that Morris is safe but poor Horace is hungry now
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Thanks Ann. it was written a while ago, I wasn´t sure if it should go into the book but decided to post it instead. Glad you like it
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Whew, I'm glad Morris didn't get eaten!
Beautiful and charming collaboration, would make a lovely book!
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^^ Thank you dear friend. Alina and I have compiled a childrens illustrated poetry book all about Muriel Mouse and Horace and Morris are her friends , I have already sent the manuscript off to many Literature agents and publishers but alas no luck up to now. The most publishers don´t want poetry and even so books these days are being replaced with the internet but we´ll keep trying, we might have a bit of luck one day
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Oh don't give up, I'm sure someone somewhere will love them
I don't know what country/ies you are trying in but I just found this list of publishers who publish children's poetry in the UK.
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Oh thanks alot you are so kind.. I have been trying in England and the USA but I will see if your list has other publishers on it and have a go, I´ll keep trying I have everything to gain and nothing to lose
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It's my pleasure. I wish you every success, I am sure that children everywhere and of all ages (even grown up ones) will love these characters
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Sent my manuscript off today to a publisher on your list (here´s hoping ) thanks ever so much I´ll let you know if something comes of it
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Keeping my fingers crossed for you
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Such a cute story and wonderful art! Well done!
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I am glad you enjoyed it Thank you for your lovely comment
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Thanks Alina
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