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Ideas, thoughts and feelings
wander through my head.
Longing, enjoyment,
frustration, dread.
Thoughts emerging in the middle
amongst all this tumult,
strive to find a way out
without finding fault.
The walls of this labyrinth
are all inside my mind,
many ways to decide upon
before the light they find.
The spark of ideas,
ignite and rush forth,
only to be extinguished
as the way it gets cut short.
So many decisions to be made
each day, day in and out
but not all make it through the labyrinth,
the labyrinth of doubt.
Written by Suzanne Karbach
11th June 2015
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This was great! Each line struck a cord with my own personal feelings and experience. You've beautifully put into words something I've always struggled to give structure. I'd fave it a few more times, were there the option!
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Oh that´s so nice of you to say thank you, I am so glad you could relate to it and appreciate you faving . *big smiles*
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the last words are great!!!
i liked it more and more while getting closer to the end!
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Oh I feel honoured and very happy. Thank you
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I liked your contribution for this contest. Decisions are often so hard to make. I'm not too bad on making them now but it is putting them into action I find not so easy. Procrastination is my middle name!
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Thanks Shelly, yes sometimes just weighing up the pros and cons can be a task in its self . Thanks for 
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It's just a great piece of poetry. Keep on the good work.
I really like it
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Oh vielen Dank das freut mich und für den
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Ach was, dafür musst du mir nicht danken
Wenn mir etwas gefällt dann kommt es in die Favoriten
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An excellent poem. I really like this one, especially those last verses.
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Thank you so much and for the
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Dear Supach,
you obviously got stuck in some game that looks insoluble. There are thoughts and feelings and even more thoughts about thoughts maybe ...hehe mate. I guess you really need some anchor points for your new spider web sth like. What if you do not call it a maze, what about a road... do wrong and right things or just let them happen ...you´re pushin´too hard baby, tell ya.
Nevertheless thanks for contributing this, let me call it a fragment, to the group
Nine-Muses
Ps: just noticed, you wrote that for some competition, but... yeah sth around this might be true for you as well?
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No nothing personal here, just trying to compare how complex the brain deals with decisions with a labyrinth and how some ideas come to a dead end before they get going.
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I really liked that one. You are most welcome.
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Better to be in a Labyrinth with thoughts and feelings
Than a straight line with no feelings or thoughts.
Love your poetry always makes me think
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yes I agree on that Iris
Thank you so much
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I love this poem so much! Very, very well done.
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Beautiful lines, dear Suzanne. Perhaps the most important thing is ... we are not totally lost within this labyrinth.
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Thanks Mayumi 
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You're welcome, dear Suzanne.
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^^
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