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Published: 2017-02-28 03:14:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1516; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Description
Name: Lemon DinkyAge: 18
Personality: Gluttonous
Alternate Form: Bear
Ability: Electricity. The ring around her waist is also electrified and can change size when she transforms or becomes fat.
Unique to alternate form: Lemon can become a living generator that instantly powers up every electronic object. The more treats Lemon has ate, the stronger and bigger the range the electricity becomes. However, if she does this too long or too hard, the electricity stops and she becomes super thin.
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hello there
I want to say about this OC it looks so bad I don't have any Idea what is this thing
no offense this is really bad and I think you need some improvement for this OC and please don't use a circle tools it will makes your OC looks bad
and the body shape looks so weird and it was too long
and also the colour not really match her at all try use a blue or red colour it would be really great
well I don't want to talk much so I guess that's what i want to say for today sorry if i make you sad i didn't mean to do that
don't worry i know you can do much better just need some practice
stay determined.
-Icy!Snowy-Chan
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Sorry, it looks kinda corrupt to be honest.
But don't worry, I know a way for you to improve!
First of all, don't use any circle or line tools whenever you draw your final draft. The whole entire body can look disproportionately placed when you use the tools sometimes. Practice making the hands better by getting examples from your own hand! That way, it's more likely that it will be better! Maybe don't make the stomach area a lot more larger than the upper section...
The colors are unique and the legs and feet too!
I'm sure you'll improve soon!
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umm.. what can i say except this is terrible i am so sorry but the umm "chest" and things it is kind of bad and is she pregnant? Also stop using the circle tool please its cringy also try to make it more proportionate please. I do have to say this does look very original and not anything that i have ever seen before but it is definitely not the best i have seen from an artist i do have to say that it is hard to tell the species of your oc is it an otter or a dog?
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Lemon: Well, I'm named that due to my coloring.
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And she has a unique figure too.
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