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Published: 2010-11-22 22:33:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 4604; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 0
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Pin Up Photoshoot.Model, Hair & MUA: Patsy.
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I am afraid that this photo does not work for me. As far as I can appreciate how lovely the model is, how sexy her legs are and how nice body she has - I am afraid that the photograph itself is poor. I can see too many errors, my eyes don't know where to focus.
1. The composition is not well thought out. Both chairs are cut in half, which is a distraction. Either have one in and one cut off, none in or both in. Secondly, the model would have looked nicer positioned more to the left, so she has space to look into.
2. The focus is loads off. It seems like you have focussed on the girls leg and not on her face.
3. The Lighting is VERY flat. There are no interesting shadows, no light play, no light differentiation and her upper leg seems slightly overexposed.
I like the idea though, of a girl at the bar. The clothing is nice too and matches well. I just don't think that this image is a good photograph.
Bart
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thankyou, very helpful.
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