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Published: 2016-10-05 20:25:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 10
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Ok so apparently Star Treasure has been cursed by somepony and is now a vampire pony! And now she has become Countess Starula!Rider Steel: *Goes to look for Star Treasure, finds her but is surprised to see that she is now a vampire pony!
.Star Treasure: Hello Rider! *Smiles as she shows her fangs*
.Rider Steel: Star, what happened to you?
.Star Treasure: Oh nothing Rider...look into my eyes! *Eyes glow up red*
Rider Steel: What are you..... *Becomes fascinated by her eyes* :0.
Star Treasure: Yes, keep staring, don't look away....
.Rider Steel: *Eyes turn swirly*
Star Treasure: Submit to me........
.Rider Steel: I submit..........*Falls under her spell*
Rider Steel And Star Treasure are MLP Oc's and are owned by me and me only!
This is avaliable for rp mode in the comments section.
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*Selena Sees the two* nopenopenopenopenopenope all my nopes *turns around to Go away*
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Star Treasure: *Stops selena* Look into my eyes! *Eyes glow red*
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Selens:ngh!*manages to Look away But only with the Most of her powers* what do YOU think YOU Are doing *huff*
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Become my minion!-Star Treasure
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Selena: *trying to concentrate,the spell still having Effect ON her*..N-no!
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Selena: *breathing heavily* LEAVe ME along!*tries to Charger at her but all that she Managed to do is some bubbles*
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Star Treasure: Surrender
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Selens:ugh....N-Never*flies up in the sky hoping to get a advantage*
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Star Treasure: *flies after her*
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Selena:*her Wings Are Made of Water so she can't Go very fast*
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*Catches her* Submit!-Star Treasure
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Selena: ngh*keeps running away,trying to reach her cave*
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Surrender!-Star Treasure
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Selena:i...will...surrender...NOT!*trying to concentrate+
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Selena:*collapses ON the ground*
(thanks for the watch )
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Surrender!-Star Treasure
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Selena.*Struggling to stand up* Never!
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Surrender!-Star Treasure
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Selena:*it's more of a whisper* never!
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Hiss! You will surrender! *Tries to hypnotize her*-Star Treasure
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Selena:*stands up,weakly still staring into. Her eyes* uh...
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Just give up!-Star Treasure
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Selena:I....*struggling,stare into her eyes*
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Selena:ugh.....*struggling* no...
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Star Treasure: *Eyes glow hypnotic* Obey me!
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Selena:*mutters* anyone...help me...
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Star Treasure: No pony can help you now!
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*Brianna saw the whole thing happen, and was clearly unfazed by Star's hypnosis. She walked over.* "Who are you two, and what are you doing?"
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I am Star Treasure and this is now my vampire king Rider Steel.... -Star Treasure
I belong to Star..... -Rider Steel
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"Uh huh. Well, what exactly are you doing in the Everfree Forest at this time of night?"
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To suck blood of course!-Star Treasure
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"Well, Changelings don't have blood, so I guess I'm not the type for you. By the way, what did you do to this guy? Oh...no need to answer that question. It seems like you did a level 3 hypnotic spell on him. If you want to know how I know about this stuff, it's because Changelings usually cast spells on ponies and other creatures. Like what my mother Chrysalis did to Shining Armor." *Brianna's expression looked annoyed when she said Shining Armor's name.*
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Ok than....-Star Treasure
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"Why did you do this to him? Just for fun, me?"
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No I like him!-star treasure
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*Brianna paused for a bit, as if sensing something.* "Oh, yeah, I can definitely taste some love here." *Brianna's horn glowed as she ate some more.*
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"Are you alright?"
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Yeah just fine-Star Treasure
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Nu! *smack* Bad kitty pony vampire!
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