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SuperRetroBoy — Johnny Retro WIP char D image

Published: 2012-03-12 02:05:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description WIP character design thing
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Comments: 3

MrNostalgia [2012-03-12 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]

looking sweet man
okay
i think the shape behind johnny should be lighter to make him stand out more or make him lighter
the shadow on him should be going the other way since the light source is the atomballorblightthingy he's making i think the shape behind him should also be more crisp and less wobbly
and that also goes for the shape behind the shape
i think his right arm is a little stiff i would add a bit of a curve to it, bend it a little
the shoe behind should be smaller since its further away

hmm hope those help man
overall awesome work

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SuperRetroBoy In reply to MrNostalgia [2012-03-12 04:25:18 +0000 UTC]

What's great is that with the method I'm doing this in, it's not going to be that much a hassle to fix the changes you suggested. Time for a well-deserved break!

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SuperRetroBoy In reply to MrNostalgia [2012-03-12 02:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it does! Thanks!

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