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pencilpiwi [2019-04-08 00:50:00 +0000 UTC]

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this is such a great art work!!she is so cute, but i would recommend adding a bit of colour on the bottom half like you have with the hair at the top which would balance it out. also maybe a little bit of saturation on the skin. i get it if you are going for a more grey skinned person but there can be colour in that too. i like how the hair brings focus to the face so if you add colour anywhere else you could make it more eye catching. another important thing is the pose. it needs to reflect on what kind of character she is. on this pose you could slightly arch her back forwards to pose a sadder kind of character or push her chest out to make her proud and confident. poses and twists in the stance really help bring out personality.

thanks for reading

p.s i really like it. its got so much potential..also please dont think i think im better than you i am definitely not e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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ODSThero [2019-04-07 23:53:22 +0000 UTC]

She looks great!

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SilverKazeNinja [2019-04-07 23:47:39 +0000 UTC]

And adorable little beepboop~!

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YiBing1999 [2019-04-07 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to use her and remember to credit me when you do. She is cute when you draw her.

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