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SureThingsFall — Goodbye
Published: 2011-04-26 01:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 42; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description How Does one take back an act
How does one take back their words
Shall I scream it so loud
Even the sunrise quivers and hides
Shall I sing it in a song
A song so powerful
Every mocking bird that hears my chorus will forever utter your name
No
Because the words, the act, the feeling
That I wish I wanted to forget
Is the most powerful occurrence of all
Two people
Three words
Of trust, of passion, of commitment
Attempting to counteract one
Ungodly, unholy, unforgivable word
Good bye
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Comments: 6

CFH501 [2011-05-03 03:59:48 +0000 UTC]

Cha, wicked awesome!

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SureThingsFall In reply to CFH501 [2011-05-08 20:38:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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hersheysluv [2011-04-26 02:07:12 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful! I love it. The words themselves are pretty common in poetry, but the meaing behind them is so powerful and... just beautiful. I can feel the sadness you probably felt when you wrote this.

Will you be writing more?

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SureThingsFall In reply to hersheysluv [2011-04-26 02:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your input, it means a lot. Yes, I was pretty upset. I'm glad that through the experience I was able to write something that someone else could enjoy though. And yes, I have accounts on other sites and more work that I will be uploading.

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hersheysluv In reply to SureThingsFall [2011-04-26 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome I will be sure to keep an eye out for your work.

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SureThingsFall In reply to hersheysluv [2011-04-28 00:57:47 +0000 UTC]

ok, cool. and thanks

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