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Published: 2011-03-07 06:57:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Butterfly, flutter among the fear of my life
Spread wings gently along the lines of my stomach
While I look at the cracks in the ground
Remind me that I'm still alive
That I still feel

Set me free to the world that traps me
And the love that hates me
To the song that continues to play
Endless treasure make me cry
Pretend to care

Butterfly, spread your joy through me
Make me laugh at the thought of love
Cause me to cry at the reality of loss
Let me watch you fly away
Remember your journey

Butterfly...
set yourself free
Set me free...
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Comments: 17

LaughingGal13 [2011-03-09 21:19:46 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful imagery. I love it.

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surrender-myself In reply to LaughingGal13 [2011-03-10 01:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. Thank you so much for liking it.

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LaughingGal13 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-10 01:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Your super duper aleuper welcome!

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surrender-myself In reply to LaughingGal13 [2011-03-10 16:26:18 +0000 UTC]

And you added me to your watch, that's great. Thank you.

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LaughingGal13 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-11 02:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome. Its rare for me to find literature I like on DA.

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surrender-myself In reply to LaughingGal13 [2011-03-11 05:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Really? I'm impressed. Me too. I find it VERY hard to find things worth reading. I'm in a slump, so I'm working on stuff, slowly, but surely. Next one should be about a kid who is experiencing life. We will see how it works out.

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LaughingGal13 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-11 20:05:52 +0000 UTC]

Ooo I can't wait to read it!

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surrender-myself In reply to LaughingGal13 [2011-03-11 22:58:58 +0000 UTC]

I know. I need to get on it. I want it to run smoothly, so I hope I can get the first chapter out today and see where it goes.

Thank you SO much for the support.

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LaughingGal13 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-12 23:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome! Take your time, don't rush it. Great work takes time.

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surrender-myself In reply to LaughingGal13 [2011-03-14 06:27:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm off a lot next week, so we will see what I create.

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LaughingGal13 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-14 21:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Woo!

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Den12 [2011-03-08 00:49:13 +0000 UTC]

You should listen to the song "Set Me Free" by Casting Crowns. This totally reminded me of it in some ways.

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surrender-myself In reply to Den12 [2011-03-08 20:11:45 +0000 UTC]

I appreciated the song very much. Thank you for the request. I enjoyed it. And yeah, I can see where you would think that. It's more about how love can set you free. I tried to make it like the butterflies in someone's stomach that wanted to be let out.

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Den12 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-08 20:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Ok, yeah I always forget to look at titles seemingly, so I guess I missed the point. I'm glad you liked the song though.

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surrender-myself In reply to Den12 [2011-03-09 05:20:29 +0000 UTC]

You don't have to always get the point. The point can be whatever you make of it. I just tell you what my perspective is. You can do what you want.

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Den12 In reply to surrender-myself [2011-03-10 01:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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surrender-myself In reply to Den12 [2011-03-10 16:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Anytime.

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