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LOL please excuse the badbad corny titleanyway, this popped up in my head today. had to draw it.
here's a little drabble turned VERY LONG drabble for the pic;
The young lord let his feet move him noiselessly through the dark forest as his red eyes scanned the area for any threats. Senses alert, but figure relaxed and seemingly languid in its proud posture, he slowly let the many troubles of the day disappear along with the fading light coming from his castle as he travelled further into the mass of trees. It had been a long day; time had dragged on mercilessly slow and left him with a piercing migraine. Being the lone ruler of the lands his father had left him, the youthful lord had quite a few problems to deal with daily. Assassins – too wary of his hard required reputation of an inhuman warrior, possessing almost demon skills – set after his little brother; the only one left who shared his blood, the only one he did not wish dead. Arrogant, narrow-minded old fools complained about his rule, dared to imply he was too weak to protect his people. The list was long, and not one he cared to check off in his mind. The cool air of the spring’s night was all too soothing, as was the soft, melodic sounds of the nature surrounding him.
His castle was now nowhere in sight as he turned his head to glance over his shoulder, and only trees, stones and bushes lied ahead of him. The path he was walking was the one he usually travelled upon during nights like these, but tonight, he was going to continue onwards instead of turning left at the small crossroad up ahead. The simple route leading in a circle would be too short for the quiet, sizzling frustrations he needed to vent. The small, wobbly path leading into the heart of the forest would make for a better walk, he mused.
Passing the crossroad, and moving onward, the young lord began to take notice of the slightly unnerving lack of moonlight and mischievous twinkles of stars. The trees were growing denser, he noted after only a few minutes’ walk away from his usual route, and his previous relaxed and smooth posture quickly tensed ever so slightly. The thick darkness around him were shifting as he moved, and the dark tint of green and blue faded into pitch black only a few meters before him. It wasn’t until a generous amount of time had passed, and the chill had finally grown enough to cause goose bumps on his pale skin, that the lord began to feel an unfamiliar sense of unease. Gone was the slight wariness of walking alone in a dense, wild forest at night, replaced by something eerie that made him pause in his steps for less than a minute before he stubbornly continued on. Whatever lied before him needed to be seen if it dared cause him such discomfort, even if it was very slight.
Nostrils flaring, he took in the generous aroma of an old forest in spring. He noticed the previous chill in the air was all but gone, and as his red eyes closed to dangerous slits and focused in a sharp glare before him, he was positive the foreboding darkness of the forest were thinning, just like the trees. He would call it impossible, unless he was heading towards a glade, because this was surely well into the densest part of the forest. However, what made the feeling of unease increase was the simple fact that he had wandered down this path many nights before in the past, and not once had he stumbled upon something even close to a glade this far into the woods. He clenched his hands for a second before relaxing them and letting them resume their lazy swing by his hips. His sword safely tucked in his obi, the young lord found himself letting out a small, quiet growl at his reaction. He should not be so surprised, when this old, old forest had had many folklores and legends told by not only by the village people, but also from his former great clan whom was rumored to be the offspring of a forest demon and his human lover. But there were mostly tales of spirits, demons, witches and evil creatures that feasted on whoever dared to stray too far away. Lost soldiers who fed on the innocence of women, accompanied by equally hungry sorceresses who gladly stole the hearts of the poor mortal men that fell for their deceiving beauty. He absently wondered what he might find as the moonlight finally crept through the thinning roof of the forest; all the while fighting the slight amusement such superstition brought him. Titling his head up to observe the strange tint the moon’s usually silver liquid light had taken, the young lord almost failed to notice a significant change that occurred the moment his eyes left the paths before him. If it hadn’t been for his already alert senses, or sharp mind and red, demon eyes, it might’ve been lost to him. But as he stilled, and carefully observed from the corner of his eyes, he saw he was now standing in the middle of the glade he knew should not be there. Where there had been trees surrounding him, were now simply grass, bushes and flowerbeds. Carefully, slowly, he brought his head down again and let his eyes roam the area, stopping only to take in a wavering, weak light by a thin, young-looking Sakura tree. As his sight focused, the red of his eyes burning clearer in concentration, he swore the light was growing. A ripple through the air, as if it was water, had him drawing his sword in an instant. The ripples soon settled, but with the calm came a flash of light from the weak source he had been staring at so intently. It blinded him, the sudden burst of yellow and pink in the midnight blue surroundings. But as nothing attacked, and his inhuman eyes settled, he warily relaxed a bit. The light, he saw, was now the shape of a…woman? Blinking, he looked closer. The pink and the yellow had settled, and the more he stared, the closer he looked…the light faded into bright colors. Skin like peach, a dress like pollen and leaves; her hair like the petals of the young Sakura tree she leaned against. His eyes roamed her body, took in the colors, the shapes, until he reached her face. Pouty lips, button-nose like a child’s, and eyes like pale, glittering emerald; twinkling with the same mischief he only saw in the stars. She was a beauty. He found himself unable to look away, to break the tender contact of her stunning eyes. And then, she spoke.
“You embarrass me, my lord. Since you entered here, your eyes have not left me.”
A siren. Or perhaps a fairy? She could be nothing else. Her voice was smooth, quiet and pleasant like…flowers. He blinked, trying to lessen some of her shine but the image remained the same. He refused to acknowledge the urge to rub his eyes.
“My lady,” he replied, bowing his head ever so slightly but not daring to let her out of his sight. “I apologize. It was not my intention; I merely came here for a nightly walk.”
She smiled, leaning against the tree on her slim arms, and lifted a delicate foot playfully behind her. “This far into the woods, sire? And at such a time. Do you not know of the dangers, or are you simply seeking them out?”
He found himself smiling, equally amused by the situation as this strange woman-like creature appeared to be. “Why yes, my lady, I enjoy a stroll in the dark. I hold little fear for the dangers of these woods; however, you might have proved me wrong. Such beauty should rightfully scare any mortal man who stumbles upon it.”
“Oh, my lord!” she sang out, giggling and swinging her leg up further behind her, drawing his attention to the see-through fabric of her thin dress as her knee bent. “Am I worthy of such praise, from a man who fearlessly enters a place like this? Tell me, sire, what is your name?”
Letting her first question slide, he answered with another bow; deeper this time. “I am Uchiha Itachi, fair lady. Might I ask what name you go by?”
“Uchiha Itachi, I am no lady,” she said after a moment of silence where not even the forest made a sound. “I am Sakura.”
I am a nymph, and you a demon.
---END----
hope you liked it!
drabble & pic (C) surrenderdammit
Naruto (C) Kishimoto
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Comments: 44
surrenderdammit In reply to SakuraBishop [2015-08-19 11:10:59 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you again that is so kind of you
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SakuraBishop [2015-01-21 16:08:08 +0000 UTC]
Perfect nickname for her. The nymph of the Sakura tree.
Love it!!!
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surrenderdammit In reply to SakuraBishop [2015-08-19 11:10:44 +0000 UTC]
(sorry for taking so effing long to reply urgh I haven't been on here for ages *headdesk*)
thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! ^^
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sakuraXshaddowXkiss [2011-07-28 22:10:13 +0000 UTC]
o so pretty! luv the pic and the lil drabble!!! XD
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surrenderdammit In reply to sakuraXshaddowXkiss [2011-07-30 14:35:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed both!
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sakuraXshaddowXkiss In reply to surrenderdammit [2011-07-31 23:26:41 +0000 UTC]
enjoyed is an understatment!!! <3 i luuuuuuuved them!! ^^
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sukilovemenow [2011-07-06 00:27:42 +0000 UTC]
awww soooooo kawii love the story its so awesome i like the part when she said Tell me, sire, what is your name?” Letting her first question slide, he answered with another bow; deeper this time. “I am Uchiha Itachi, fair lady. Might I ask what name you go by?” “Uchiha Itachi, I am no lady,” she said after a moment of silence where not even the forest made a sound. “I am Sakura.”
I am a nymph, and you a demon.
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surrenderdammit In reply to sukilovemenow [2011-07-18 22:19:32 +0000 UTC]
awww! thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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hayley1000 [2010-11-07 23:30:59 +0000 UTC]
is there a story for it i loved the picture it was beautiful and the drabble was quite good
is there a story for it if there is can you please send me the link please
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surrenderdammit In reply to hayley1000 [2010-11-09 14:05:20 +0000 UTC]
nah it's just the drabble I wrote, I haven't continued it but I'm very glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
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gracefulstrawberries [2010-11-05 02:33:48 +0000 UTC]
this was frustrating to read because i'm busy at the moment and didn't want to stop but i couldn't not read it! >.< gah! it was lovely but i'm confused ^.^'
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surrenderdammit In reply to gracefulstrawberries [2010-11-06 11:21:52 +0000 UTC]
haha I hate when that happens with a story! XD but I'm glad you enjoyed it so anyway, yeah, sorry about that. I had plans to continue it and make some thing clearer, but I never did ^^'''
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gracefulstrawberries In reply to surrenderdammit [2011-02-28 05:42:34 +0000 UTC]
oh haha okay. well thanks for interestin read aha
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avatargirl92 [2010-01-15 03:58:42 +0000 UTC]
That's so not a drabble; it's like a oneshot.
A really good oneshot!
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surrenderdammit In reply to avatargirl92 [2010-01-16 13:17:39 +0000 UTC]
yeah, drabble-turned-oneshot then haha 8D thank you!
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surrenderdammit In reply to MissLuckychan29 [2009-09-27 08:29:21 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you~!
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rosepetal987 [2009-06-07 04:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Your drabble as you choice to call it was wonderfully done, I love the imagery you use for it, simply wonderful. I like how you made Sakura's hair seem,, hmm I guess softer would be the word, your picture is very calming in a manner that I enjoy. <3 ~
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surrenderdammit In reply to rosepetal987 [2009-06-07 13:37:09 +0000 UTC]
aw, thank you! glad you liked it! ^^ and yeah, I wanted it to be softer...actually, I wanted to the pic to be soft haha
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rosepetal987 In reply to surrenderdammit [2009-06-16 15:26:15 +0000 UTC]
*stares at icon, addiction~* You're welcome, <3 I think it is very soft in a glowish manner, as in it emits a soft glow. I really do like it. *Not a big fan of ItaSaku, or really any AkaSaku that is either; but, I like this one a lot.* Just remember to have fun.
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surrenderdammit In reply to rosepetal987 [2009-07-16 13:42:17 +0000 UTC]
haha it's all in the loop! ;D anyway, thank you! glad you liked it despite not being a fan of a pairing! ^^ that's a really flattering compliment!
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rosepetal987 In reply to surrenderdammit [2009-07-23 21:47:06 +0000 UTC]
O ya, loopa loop. Ya, I'm a Uchiha addiction fan, lol, as in if I see one I atack it. Your welcome. <3 Yup/
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surrenderdammit In reply to mugel90 [2009-05-23 18:02:16 +0000 UTC]
haha don't think I'll be writing another, and if I do, it won't be NaruSaku, sorry. really not a fan of that pairing
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zanessa4ever [2008-12-08 02:42:19 +0000 UTC]
....Sakura looks like the smex here. Hahaha. XD Itachi knows he likes it.
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surrenderdammit In reply to zanessa4ever [2008-12-08 22:06:15 +0000 UTC]
*grins* yes, he knows he likes it...alot ;D thanks for the comment!
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starburst13 [2008-09-10 13:36:38 +0000 UTC]
love the pic^^
but i read this on fanfiction......so i guess someone took your work
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surrenderdammit In reply to starburst13 [2008-09-10 14:47:28 +0000 UTC]
haha nono, I have a fanfiction.net account but thanks for pointing it out anyway ^-^ and yeah, thanks for the compliment too! ^-^
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starburst13 In reply to surrenderdammit [2008-09-10 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]
lol its okay^^ and np
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Itasaku16319 [2008-09-09 18:45:58 +0000 UTC]
this is so beautiful! And the little story is amazing also!
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surrenderdammit In reply to Itasaku16319 [2008-09-09 20:18:01 +0000 UTC]
thank you! glad you liked the story too!! ^-^
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MissUchiha13 [2008-09-08 22:53:35 +0000 UTC]
That was so beautifuly written you know i loved it and i love the picture to hun hehe it's gorgeous ^^
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surrenderdammit In reply to MissUchiha13 [2008-09-09 04:59:53 +0000 UTC]
haha aww thank you!
I have no doubts there were a lot of errors in my writing though >_> lol it was so late when I wrote it haha XD ah well...
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MissUchiha13 In reply to surrenderdammit [2008-09-09 22:25:02 +0000 UTC]
I LOVES IT i wish i could write like that and english isn't even your birth language YOUR BETTER THAN MEEE hehe
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surrenderdammit In reply to MissUchiha13 [2008-09-10 12:33:23 +0000 UTC]
hahaha thank you luv
but it's been drilled into me to be careful with grammar and stuff so perhaps I pay more attention to it...doesn't mean I'm better though XD and it's not that big of a thing, I've studied English since I was 8 after all. but yeah still, that's quite a compliment from you so yeah thanks again haha
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MissUchiha13 In reply to surrenderdammit [2008-09-12 16:37:37 +0000 UTC]
hehe no problem hun and yeah you are really good at it ^^
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