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Published: 2011-01-20 01:42:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2009; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 11
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"Vanille throws herself onto Fang's back, arms automatically snaking into a familiar grip. She hysterically remembers hot molasses days when she would pester Fang into giving her piggyback rides ('Oof, gotta stop feeding you, kid!') and how the back of the elder's shirt would stick to the front of the younger's top ('No, you sweaty bugger, it's the other way around!') and she always fancied that at that moment they were two bodies wearing the same skin--She jams the syringe into her partner's neck.
the sun's grown dim
Fang chokes wetly, eyes wide. She takes two stumbling steps, swaying like a drunk. Suddenly, her legs fail her and she drops to her knees, hunched in a half bow. It takes a herculean effort just to stay upright; she begins to slump, her rattling breath catching continuously in her throat. Vanille clings tighter, babbling a desperate mantra through gritted teeth: 'I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry--'
and the sky's turned black
Her thumb stays firm on the plunger, as if release would cause Fang's lifeblood to spray out in protest. She is painfully aware of her friend (dear god, her friend)'s pulse fluttering weakly against her fingers, pounding her with futile little fists. Her hand is numb, but she feels each minuscule beat like bullets to her conscience...
'cos i loved her
In the end, after Fang has finally-- agonizingly-- stopped moving, and world has burnt away, Vanille realizes no one is coming for them. And when Fang wakes with no memory of the proceedings, she leaves her faith in the Maker smoldering with the ashes. She doesn't want this cosmic indifference-- so she stays. And for Fang, she pretends.
and she didn't love back..."
END STORYTIME
People have been telling me to turn my "Gangs of Gran Pulse" shenanigans into a fanfic/comic, and the above is yet another reason why it's proooobably not happening:
I SUCK AT PROSE.
On that note, RAGNAROK POWER SUIT LOLOLOLOLOL
OTL
Song lyrics (c)Johann Johannson
Whoa, craziness. I've heard the general consensus is that Etro de-powered Fang's first Ragnarok, but I think making VANILLE responsible for that is more poignant and amplifies her guilt. Annnd it's more viable in a non-magic AU...
Oh, and sorry for the sloppy art guys, my comp caught a horrendous virus a few weeks ago, and I whipped this up really fast coz I didn't want ya'll to forget me. HA.
Suddenly had this idea to convert FFXIII into a mafia story. Cocoon and Gran Pulse as opposing syndicates= genre fun. >:] Flying bullets! Molotov cocktails! Cigar-chomping! YES SIR GIVE ME MOAR
Other Gangs of Gran Pulse art:
Fang, Lightning, Aqua Club: [link]
Fang Break: [link]
Fang and Vanille Hail: [link]
Gangs of Gran Pulse Cast: [link]
Fang Individual: [link]
Fang and Lightning Confrontation: [link]
Lightning Individual: [link]
Vanille Individual: [link]
Fang and Lightning: [link]
Vanille and Fang: [link]
JESUS what a long fuckin' artist's comment D:
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Comments: 21
LuckyFireRabbit [2011-04-18 17:12:25 +0000 UTC]
...you're writing style is great! For heaven's sake! I wish I could write more like that! Give yourself a little more credit.
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suzui In reply to LuckyFireRabbit [2011-04-19 00:25:02 +0000 UTC]
hahah thankee kindly! I'm sure you're just good, if not better
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LuckyFireRabbit In reply to suzui [2011-04-20 00:11:36 +0000 UTC]
I still got a lot to learn, but thanks much. And you're very welcome.
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suzui In reply to Blood-Spirit [2011-03-08 23:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! I tend to do that for some reason... although in my defense, Fang really IS much bigger than Vanille Sorry for the late reply
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Sapphire720 [2011-01-21 06:21:47 +0000 UTC]
I really love this series of fanart you have going on here. Just a really cool idea and that writing was not bad at all.
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suzui In reply to Sapphire720 [2011-01-21 10:41:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the kind words I'm all warm and fuzzy inside, hahaha! I'm glad the writing was palatable-- I think it's so stilted
Anyhoo, your sig makes me sad, what with FFXIII-2 coming out. Somehow, I think that game is going to kill any chance of Flight/Flaire
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Sapphire720 In reply to suzui [2011-01-21 20:15:58 +0000 UTC]
Lol, if anything you can only get better. And plus, being tough on yourself leads to always become better.
You should check out my latest journal entry then lol but really, i hope they don't. I really really hope they dont.
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suzui In reply to Sapphire720 [2011-01-22 02:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Or it causes creative constipation, hahahha!! but now I'm just bein' argumentative...
Yeah, honestly I think that dude is going to be a love interest. I don't think Fang and Vanille are going to be in it at all...although I wish they'd do something like FFVIII with the Squall and Laguna parallel story lines. That'd be so boss.
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MidnightMoons [2011-01-20 06:38:37 +0000 UTC]
reaction? OMG Fang nuuu D: Vanille what are you doing?! Why is there fire everywhere!
But anyway *thumbs up* Gangs of Gran Pulse is a cool idea! :3
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suzui In reply to MidnightMoons [2011-01-21 10:36:26 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHHAA-- the illogical burning background is totally the product of my lazy "get something up quick!" mentality. Better than gray, I say >_> Glad you like it! I'll try my best to keep it comin'
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Stalker8241 [2011-01-20 03:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh...my heart hurts now ;_;. Fang you best love vanille back bitch!
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suzui In reply to Stalker8241 [2011-01-21 10:33:25 +0000 UTC]
An emotional response! that makes me happy
hahaha it's up for your interpretation who's lovin' who... I mean, you could also spin it that Vanille loved (read "had faith in") the Maker but "she" didn't come through...
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Stalker8241 In reply to suzui [2011-01-21 20:22:59 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, you now I just might. it on your page?
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suzui In reply to Stalker8241 [2011-01-22 02:30:47 +0000 UTC]
ahhh, eh? You just might what? What's on my page?
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Stalker8241 In reply to suzui [2011-01-22 04:47:30 +0000 UTC]
Read "had faith in". It's a story write? I'm honestly very lazy and wish to be told where I would find it.
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suzui In reply to Stalker8241 [2011-01-22 19:49:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I was using "read" in another context-- I meant "actually meaning," not reading. Sorry!
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Stalker8241 In reply to suzui [2011-01-22 19:58:07 +0000 UTC]
So thats why I ended up not finding it. Oh well.
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blackkat9666 [2011-01-20 01:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol that artist's comment was probably long but I read everything and this is my reaction:
NOOOOOO FAAAAANNNNGGG D: ZOMFG SDUIHRGSGFGJHNRS!!!!
Very interesting though XD
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suzui In reply to blackkat9666 [2011-01-21 10:30:56 +0000 UTC]
Thankee, friend-- you're a rarity on dA Glad it piqued your fancy!
Hahha, I think Fang's got it the toughest out of all the characters in the game. Poor girl
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blackkat9666 In reply to suzui [2011-01-21 14:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, she's one of my faves too so I was panicking around the end XD
And you're welcome
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