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CHAPTER 1 FLASH VIEWER
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suzuran In reply to El-Bronco [2009-10-04 02:17:31 +0000 UTC]
hehe, "burn"...
err i mean...
I rarely do actually I usually just pick darker colors.
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weird-enough-ya [2009-09-05 21:43:10 +0000 UTC]
awesome 2nd page!!
Too bad his hair got cut...
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Zexion-Tamer [2009-09-04 15:06:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh crap!
This is amazing! I can't wait for more! (but don't rush yourself in getting them out and mess up the quility[sp] )
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suzuran In reply to Zexion-Tamer [2009-09-04 16:07:48 +0000 UTC]
yay! Thanks for being a fan
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Zexion-Tamer In reply to suzuran [2009-09-12 02:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Who WOULDN'T be a fan? The art work, suspense, and story are AMAZING!
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MarKitoX-Rox3r [2009-09-03 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]
"... rebel scum"
that was so star wars!
this is awesome!!1
I wanna check the end piece!
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Twero [2009-09-03 20:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I see a battle is coming!
And don't worry about the time, we can wait until the next page.
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royal-knight-okitsu [2009-09-03 20:47:20 +0000 UTC]
Wickedly nice on page 2!
the colors are so popping they get the attention of the reader/viewer!
and the characters are so well done!
..... i have now become an addict to this story!!
now i hide for the next one... for i wait in the shadows...
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NelsonRibeiro [2009-09-03 18:06:18 +0000 UTC]
coloring looks great. I love the smoke effect!
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Neithan-Diniem [2009-09-03 15:47:21 +0000 UTC]
Environmental effects are great ^^. And so the plot thickens... Cant wait for more.
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Ninja-Log [2009-09-03 11:28:44 +0000 UTC]
Looks...so..professional...I think I'm getting dizzy..
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BlackAriock [2009-09-03 11:16:58 +0000 UTC]
the second page finally +-+ As always Suzu you are great! I can't even imagine how much time do you spend on each page.. I love the style so simple but expressive, and your coloring is beautiful! Just as Auro-Cynade said, the sword looks a little awkward..but this is a just a little mistake. The rest is absolute great!
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suzuran In reply to BlackAriock [2009-09-04 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks verily much
I don't even know how long I spend per page cause I'm doing them in parts @_@ !
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Auro-Cyanide [2009-09-03 09:20:01 +0000 UTC]
Ah, beautiful, such detail. Love the surprised expression. You write the speech very well, it seem real. Some people are too stiff. Nice work^^ One thing is that the hand holding the sword looks a little awkward. I think you need the thumb. Don't stress about it though cause you don't really notice it compared to the glory of the rest of the page.
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suzuran In reply to Auro-Cyanide [2009-09-04 16:09:55 +0000 UTC]
aw, thanks for the suggestion I think I will add the thumb poking out XD You're right!
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ThorW [2009-09-03 07:32:22 +0000 UTC]
It looks great, and I already wanna know more about the plot. And you're right, you're crazy for making that full color, loots of work. But I wish you luck in completing this ^^
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suzuran In reply to ThorW [2009-09-04 16:09:21 +0000 UTC]
@__@ *works on page after page after page* that cliff looks awfully fun to jump off of...
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chrisdog203 [2009-09-03 06:57:46 +0000 UTC]
OMGOSh!! talk about exciting already lol ^^ that guy looks really tired haha i absolutely love the detailing in colour!
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Mizu777 [2009-09-03 05:14:11 +0000 UTC]
I love it. The whole icey atmosphere, the main character design (although it's kinda simple, but it works great. Love the headset btw)
I love the main character's hair too.
keep up the good work ^^
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