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CHAPTER 1 FLASH VIEWER
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AtsusaKaneytza [2010-07-27 09:02:06 +0000 UTC]
I've been trying for the LONGEST to figure out who Velias reminds me of... and now I know.
Trunks. With glasses.
NO WONDER HE'S SO COOL TO ME.
Not exactly fluffy though... XD
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yukidragon [2010-06-12 01:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. Suzuran seems so calm in the last panel. Clearly she must be up to something!
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ME-Jones [2010-04-19 17:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap!! He's a level 5 creeper!!! LOL, jkjk, but he IS fast!!!
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zelinath [2010-04-17 08:03:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm really digging the background in that first panel, that is some excellent use of diagonals.
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suzuran In reply to zelinath [2010-04-18 04:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I'm glad you take note of the backgrounds XD Someone told me that I don't have any at all in the comic ._.;
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zelinath In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 07:54:54 +0000 UTC]
Tsk, they need to take another look, then! The subtle cloudscapes and distant hints of buildings in many panels so far are nice.
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anchen82 [2010-04-17 04:46:23 +0000 UTC]
The last panel looks a bit rushed if that's what you mean but the first two look awesome to me ^^ Really good! Velias is really fast but Suzu is nimble LIKE A CAT!
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suzuran In reply to anchen82 [2010-04-18 04:23:26 +0000 UTC]
Ahh ;___; I redrew that last panel like 20 billion times, then I erased it and rushed a different drawing haha. XD You've got such a good eye XD
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MohitSingh [2010-04-16 22:48:16 +0000 UTC]
It's funny that the guy is trying to almost kill her and she is just smiling at him....
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suzuran In reply to MohitSingh [2010-04-18 04:24:25 +0000 UTC]
haha Yep yep, that's Suzuran for you!
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MohitSingh In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 17:26:51 +0000 UTC]
She reminds me of Luffy from one piece....
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suzuran In reply to MohitSingh [2010-04-19 01:26:10 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE One Piece Haha, I can see how they're similar personality wise. ... it would be weird to see Suzuran stretch her arm like Luffy though. *scared of the thought*
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MohitSingh In reply to suzuran [2010-04-19 18:45:36 +0000 UTC]
I agree, that thought is Scary....
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Lelouch78 [2010-04-16 20:30:18 +0000 UTC]
the evil guy looks smart cus he has glasses, but then she dodges the sword & smiles at the end "tehee u wimp" xD
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suzuran In reply to Lelouch78 [2010-04-18 04:25:46 +0000 UTC]
lol XD Yep
Thanks for reading
!
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suzuran In reply to Sariniya [2010-04-18 04:27:15 +0000 UTC]
Haha. XD Velias is fast, but Suz is faster!
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suzuran In reply to sakeee32 [2010-04-18 04:27:34 +0000 UTC]
There's never a bad time to smile! Even when someone is trying to stab you
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sakeee32 In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 08:31:02 +0000 UTC]
Always think positive, don't worry be happy.
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rialynkv [2010-04-16 13:01:35 +0000 UTC]
She smiles on the last panel, that was unexpected seeing her state at the time. XD;;
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suzuran In reply to rialynkv [2010-04-18 04:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for all the catching up comments!
I'm glad her smile is coming off as a surprise hehe
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rialynkv In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 07:05:36 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. XD
Waiting for more from you! XD
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ROXAS8854 [2010-04-16 07:45:47 +0000 UTC]
...... I'm sorry..... I'm going to have a VERY fangirlish moment now......
GAAAHHHH LKJDSJIFJCKASN VVVEEELLIIIAASSS!!! UR SSOOOO DAMN SEXY WITH UR BADASS SPEED AND ALL THAT CRAP!!! MAKE OUT WIT MEEE!!! *fangirlish squeal*
Okay done fangirling now.... This page is really nice!! RUN SUZU-CHAN!!!! HE'S GONNA GET UUUU!!!
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suzuran In reply to ROXAS8854 [2010-04-18 04:29:28 +0000 UTC]
LOL It's quite okay
I'm glad you dig Velias so much!!
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ROXAS8854 In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 18:48:35 +0000 UTC]
Um.... HELL YEAH!!!! He is just so awesome!! And sexy..... I love evil megane dudes. Those are the guys I always go for!! GAAHHH There needs to be more Velias fangirls than just me!!! He needs more LOVE!!! Hahaha! I guess he now has a #1 fangirl!! XD
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weird-enough-ya [2010-04-16 05:17:21 +0000 UTC]
all of that happens and she still manages to smile in the last panel...
amazing...
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suzuran In reply to DJwind [2010-04-18 04:30:09 +0000 UTC]
LOL XD That's a funny/cute emoticon XD XD
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Specter-Von-Baren [2010-04-16 04:24:18 +0000 UTC]
Ooooohohoho.... I just imagined the first panel in actual motion and it was awesome. Super dash and then skids perfectly for a straight shot at her.
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suzuran In reply to Specter-Von-Baren [2010-04-18 04:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Yay!
I'm glad the first two panels came off well. What you described was exactly what I was going for!
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suzuran In reply to HoshiHime5 [2010-04-18 04:32:03 +0000 UTC]
* Suz runs as fast as she can!
... and trips on a stuffed animal.
* Velias chases after her thinking he's about to win!
... but gets hit by a low hanging pipe.
@_@!
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HoshiHime5 In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 19:01:46 +0000 UTC]
wooahh get up Suz!!!!! and run noww that's your channceeee!!! DX
I can't wait for the next page!!! xD
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suzuran In reply to Blazbaros [2010-04-18 04:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Yep yep I'm glad everyone's able to get that sense ;--; I was a bit worried it wouldn't look right @_@!
thanks for reading
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Blazbaros In reply to suzuran [2010-04-18 05:03:26 +0000 UTC]
^-^ No problem! I'd like to see where this goes!
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