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swiftfox13 — Inverse Sonnet

Published: 2008-02-04 09:01:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description again, in the visual poetry simply for posting reasons.
one day i will be able to submit literature like a normal deviant >.<

It was of my misfortune,
To be born with lack of heart,
Never once did I swoon,
Due to a young man’s charming art.
As much as I would have wished,
My emotions swayed not,
And numb to efforts so pained
By boys whose affection I’d caught.
But whilst one day off guard,
I met one of an adorable kind-
My emotional ice seemed to shard,
Love no longer confined.
And now perhaps there may be hope,
I won’t be alone climbing life’s slope.


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named "Inverse Sonnet" because sonnets are usually guys whining over girls who do not return their effection.

another creative writing project
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Comments: 14

Arianna--42 [2008-02-23 02:09:53 +0000 UTC]

sweetness

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StainedUnique [2008-02-15 00:37:54 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats wow ..... awww lovely!!

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swiftfox13 In reply to StainedUnique [2008-02-15 01:25:23 +0000 UTC]

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StainedUnique In reply to swiftfox13 [2008-02-15 02:23:22 +0000 UTC]

!!

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doitl8er [2008-02-05 07:15:16 +0000 UTC]

...at least I THINK I should feel special...

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swiftfox13 In reply to doitl8er [2008-02-05 22:57:55 +0000 UTC]

of course.

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doitl8er [2008-02-05 07:12:39 +0000 UTC]

inverse, heehee! I feel so special...

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swiftfox13 In reply to doitl8er [2008-02-05 22:58:09 +0000 UTC]

si.

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LordOfTheConspicuous [2008-02-04 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]

dude!

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swiftfox13 In reply to LordOfTheConspicuous [2008-02-05 01:42:58 +0000 UTC]

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Feymeryl [2008-02-04 15:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Lovely drawing and again a beautiful poem.

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swiftfox13 In reply to Feymeryl [2008-02-05 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks you

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xcanner [2008-02-04 09:06:03 +0000 UTC]

cool drawing

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swiftfox13 In reply to xcanner [2008-02-04 09:11:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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