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Published: 2008-02-04 07:34:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description _____________________Walls crumble under Nature’s power,
__________________Love works at the centre in Eden’s bower.
______________So many creations, these pictures of time,
_______They fade in the light of their meaning sublime.

___The fate of the man-child, the meaning of man,
_____Whose soul seeks the perfect which his eyes seek in vain,
__________And under pain, pleasure- transformed into light,
____________Shines the peace of all being, time is the reply.

_In a dark room at the end of the hall,
____There are many disillusionments in these walls,
_______Every day, same time, same place,
___________And it fades away without a trace.

_____________Buried in some damned dusty corner,
_________That even the light doesn’t visit anymore,
_____One deity stirred, contorted by dying,
__The face of a person who never stops crying.

Eterne alteration now follows, now flies,
And the sum of the world in soft miniature lies,
These are all the things I can create,
And all of you will always follow the bait.
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lines taken from:
"The Sphinx" - Ralph Waldo Emerson
"Purgatory: - [link]
"Room of Masks" - [link]

this was an assignment in creative writing, we had to take lines from other poems and put them together in another way. i had to submit it as a visual poem, that's the only way it would work >.<

btw, the preview image is a thumbnail of an art project i'm finishing up.
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Comments: 7

Arianna--42 [2008-02-23 02:08:26 +0000 UTC]

COOL!!!

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doitl8er [2008-02-05 05:57:27 +0000 UTC]

woot!! I'm only a day late, lol... I think its cool that you had to use excerpts from other poems 0.o

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swiftfox13 In reply to doitl8er [2008-02-05 22:58:55 +0000 UTC]

lol.
yeah, it was rather tedious actually...

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doitl8er In reply to swiftfox13 [2008-02-06 05:06:29 +0000 UTC]

it sure looks like it! But of course, you did a fabulous job

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swiftfox13 In reply to doitl8er [2008-02-06 05:19:48 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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Feymeryl [2008-02-04 15:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem...

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swiftfox13 In reply to Feymeryl [2008-02-05 01:44:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks! ^.^

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