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Published: 2009-06-23 01:07:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 698; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 7
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THIS IS NOT MAXIMUM RIDETHIS IS KEILANI
now that we're clear on that front...
I think this one is really cool
I love her<3
No, I haven't drawn any more WS pages sorry gaiz ;-; but I'm getting to work on it
tonight
mayyybeeeee
Critique PLEASE
Song: Never Let You Go, 3rd Eye Blind
Theres every good reason for letting you go
Shes sneaky and smoked out
And its starting to show
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you turn around our back on each other
Thats a good idea break a promise to your mother
Turn around your back on each other
You say that Ive changed
Well maybe I did
But even if I changed
Whats wrong with it
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you turn around our back on each other
Thats a good idea break a promise to your mother
Turn around your back on each other
And our friends are gone and gone
And all the time moves on and on
And all I know is its wrong its wrong
And all I know its wrong its wrong its wrong its wrong
If theres a reason its lost on me
Maybe well be friends I guess well see
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you go
I never let you turn around our back on each other
Thats a good idea break a promise to your mother
Turn around lets turn on each other
Good idea break a promise to your mother
Turn around your back on each other
Thats a good idea break a promise to your mother
Turn around your back on each other
What a good idea
I remember the stupid things the mood rings the bracelets and the beads
Nickels and dimes yours and mine did you cash in all your dreams
You dont dream for me no goodbye goodbye you dont dream for me no
But I still feel you pulse like sonar from the days in the waves
That girl is like a sunburn
I would like to say
The girl is like a sunburn
I would like to say
Shes like a sunburn
Shes like a sunburn
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Comments: 13
iRawrforJohnny [2011-04-05 22:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Well Im an"Eh" artist myself but your prettty good
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SwiftstarDawn In reply to iRawrforJohnny [2011-04-07 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Hah, this one is an old picture but again, thank you
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arghsdemeter [2009-10-25 00:02:54 +0000 UTC]
YOU READ THE AWESOME MAXIMUM RIDE BOOK TOO??!! OH YEAAAHH
ITS AN AWESOME BOOK YESSSSSSSSS 8D
read all series...well i think so
i hope a new book comes out..unless series finished ..;n; nuuu
XD
haha ahh nvm this isnt her >3<
still so awesome
pwettyy wings
aww the pose is adorable >3<
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SwiftstarDawn In reply to arghsdemeter [2009-10-25 03:11:05 +0000 UTC]
LOL thank you
and YEA MAX RIDE IS AWESOME!!!
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arghsdemeter In reply to SwiftstarDawn [2009-10-25 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]
welcomes^^
YESSS SHE ISSS 8DD
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SpecialAgentArtemis [2009-07-31 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]
That's really good! I love her pose, and I like the way you did the outlines. Great work.
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TruInsanity [2009-06-23 03:05:06 +0000 UTC]
Well, I can't "officially" critique but I will do a "informal" critique
Her wings are lovely! But I see a lot of potential there, maybe more detail?? I'm not great at wings at all but a friend of mine is . Look at her stuff, I'm pretty sure you'll love it!
Her face is cute, but needs more of a detailed shading instead of just blush. But I like where you're going with it. Lots of emotion and makes it look like she's really getting into flying using a lot of energy but then again with her smile, makes it look like she's not even breaking a sweat!
Her body is nice, long, and lean. It looks great if that's what you're looking for. I think you need to work on more curves, just for practice though. It always helps to learn, you know? I think you'll be good at it.
Her body shading is great, but maybe more detail? Either way you're on your way to being super freaking awesome.
Her clothes are very well drawn but the shading doesn't exactly look like it matches the folds. But that's ok, I can't even do that sometimes
Uhm..I think that's it, but if any questions or comments to that, just let me know!! Great job!
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SwiftstarDawn In reply to TruInsanity [2009-06-23 16:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much<3 and your friend is really good at wings
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TruInsanity In reply to SwiftstarDawn [2009-06-24 16:33:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...she's kinda good at everything haha
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SwiftstarDawn In reply to GlintzDragon [2009-06-23 16:19:27 +0000 UTC]
I KNOES D8
but the auto sharpen on PS makes it all grainy
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