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Swimmer16 — Splash of Lemon Redo
Published: 2010-07-15 01:12:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 8217; Favourites: 274; Downloads: 727
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First= When life gives you lemons you make orange sherbet.
I had a couple of people tell me how to improve my other 'Lemon Splash' photo, soooo i went back and fixed up the mistakes. Here is the final result. I hope you like it just as much as the first one.
Let me know!Also, thank you to the people who spoke up and told me about the mistakes that i missed in my last photo. You know who you are.
Lastly, Don't ever be afraid to criticize my photo.
If you like this photo then take a look at some of the other photos from the Splash of Water Fruit Series = [link]
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Comments: 55
Alright, I've been thinking...
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade.
Make life take the lemons back! GET MAD!
I DON'T WANT YOUR DAMN LEMONS! WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH THESE!?
Demand to see life's manager! Make life rue the day it thought it could give CAVE JOHNSON lemons!
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!?
I'm the man whose gonna BURN your house down! With the LEMONS!
I'm gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon, THAT BURNS YOUR HOUSE DOWN!
- Cave Johnson, Portal 2
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This is literally the best comment i have ever heard. It just made my whole WEEK! haha Its such a clever idea and better yet! Your absolutely right!
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Cave Johnson is never wrong.
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This is amazing, very good splash, love it!!
Check out my galleries [link]
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Beautiful photo
I hope you don't mind.
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oh i don't mind at all!
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this Beautiful Piece of Art has been Featured Here [link]
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This one is defenitly better than the old one, but I feel like this one might be slightly over exposed.
Then it might be my monitor that's making me think that.
Wonderful photo in any case
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Thanx! and thank you for your advice! i can see what you mean about being slightly over exposed. The lemon is a little to bright for what it should be. I appreciate your comment!
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No problem
The yellow is fine and the water is spot on, but the whites in the lemon skin just burns my eyes a bit.
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lol once again your right! it kinda hurts my eyes the more i look at it. I will try to fix.
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Clear and creative. The focus on the water makes it stand out and the splash of it off the lemon definately deserves many favs and praise,
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Thank You!! It means A LOT to hear you say that. Im really glad you like it!
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my pleasure my dear! 
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Give it a shot! Really! You will have so much fun with it.
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Thats exactly what i was striving for! Thank You!
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I like this one a lot better... boosting the color really made a difference. Good job
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Thanx! Im glad you like it a lot better! Thanx again for going back and looking at this new improved photo. I appreciate it.
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I don't know why, but looking at this photo makes me feel refreshed under the hot weather
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Yes this is so much better! No offense in the other one, it's just that the space between the water and air caught my attention...
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haha trash talk the other one as much as you want. All i'm interested in is hearing the truth. I'm open to criticism.
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Good to know there's still people who wants honest criticism....
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I dont see why people wouldn't want it. Its only going to help you improve as an artist/photographer. haha its not going to kill ya.
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Can you do me a favor? Please! Can you look at this one and then the other photo in my gallery under Water Fruit Splashes. Its the same picture but different editing. Can you give me your opinion on it? Which one is better?
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Sure! (goes see the photos), Okay! I have saw them, in fact this new one looks better , I like that editing more! The colors are more shinny, and a better light! In my opinion continue with that style!
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