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For Welp I'm sure people aren't going to like this but meh
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Hello again! This piece is quite different from the other one I critiqued, so hopefully I'll have some different pointers.
First off the individual backgrounds show very lovely uses of complementary colors, which provide the color scheme unity I mentioned in my other critique. The poses are also very different from each, which gives a different feeling to each of the characters.
But since the poses are referenced from other drawings instead of real life, much of the exaggerated anatomy of the original translated poorly here. For example, Musa has a line across her pelvis that only confuses the position of her body. The torso's entirety is also turned more to her right while the legs are swiveled slightly in the other direction, making her stance very awkward. Her arms look to be drawn with the shapes of the muscles instead of having a basis for where the shoulders, elbows, and wrists should be placed. The hands are also different sizes, and her right thumb almost looks like it's on the wrong side of her hand.
However the biggest issue with Musa specifically is that her head is much too small for her body.
The other girls have much more sound anatomy, except Flora, whose head looks diamond shaped. Heads typically have the forehead and chin line up, while the nose typically has the bridge further back while the tip goes out past the chin and forehead. I would also round the hair more, to make the top of her head less pointy.
Other than that this piece is very good! the lineart is clean, and has the interesting style of being thinner on the clothing (Normally inconsistency is bad, but it works well enough here) The shading is also very consistent and fits the overall style. Well done!
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That's not Flora, that's Layla.
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Oh shoot my mistake! It's been a while since I've watched the show
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I know how you feel, the current ideas are terrible. It's good to quite after season four.
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Yeah it got really out of control after a while, which was disappointing because I really liked season 1
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Yeah, me too. Do you actually enjoy Winx FMG, or Is this a passing critique?
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Just a passing critique, I don't usually look for more adult art on purpose, but your stuff jumped out at me
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I'm not the artist, I'm only the person who ordered It.
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Oh I'm sorry! I meant to say *their art
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Thank you! I am actually tempted to redraw Musa with your recommendations in mind (but I probebly won't get round to it
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You're very welcome, I'm glad I could help!
And I relate to that so strongly lmao, going back to redraw something is somehow more difficult than just drawing something else haha
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I actually prefer pecs so massive, they resemble giant breasts, In FMG.
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Don't work derkman your girls will definatly have breasts ^_^
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Sort of not watched any in over a year though.
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So you've watched friendship is manly too then; four of the characters make these exact poses.
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Yes I used it as a referance. Also it's a great piece of fan art in my appinion ^_^
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I loved how Rarity drank tea. Manliest way ever.
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Well I hope that's a good thing
I must say out of the 4, I like how Musa came out the most.
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It Is.
I actually prefer Tecna and Stella, even though I enjoy them all.
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