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I finished it... Lelz. XD Still looks ultra random as hell to me. She just peeks out and goes "Um... hi."
Follow me on Tumblr too XD symbianl.tumblr.com/
It's on EQdaily! Yey! XD www.equestriadaily.com/2013/10…
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ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-03 01:05:34 +0000 UTC]
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Just saying this up front, this is my first time, and I don't exactly know what it means by vision, so I'm giving you a four there.
Your shading and texturing is near flawless. Her hair could be done a little better, but not by much. Her eyes look like there's a chance she might have cataracts, but only if you look really closely... or if you're me I guess. The leaves are done amazingly, not much improvement possibilities I can think of there. The shading of in inside of her hair could have been a little darker, same goes for the depths of her ear. The butterflies are done quite nicely, just like everything else. So for Technique I', giving you a 4.5. You're amazing, but you still have a little room for improvement.
Now, on originality and impact, it's not exactly the most original idea to draw Fluttershy in a stump, but just HOW you did it, with your technique, gives this massive impact. So I'm giving you a three on originality, not the most original idea, but at least it's not something that's overdone. And with Impact, I'm giving you a 4.5, amazing, but still room for improvement.
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TheBamas In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-04 21:04:08 +0000 UTC]
Sweetie it was not horrible is was just cute and andoreble cant be better ^^
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ThePoeticDragon In reply to TheBamas [2013-12-08 06:30:01 +0000 UTC]
Are you trying to kill me with cute?
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SymbianL In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-12 05:19:27 +0000 UTC]
I try to kill a few people with cute each time I release a piece. XD
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SymbianL In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-19 06:12:37 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's the health of the people or my art. I chose art.
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SymbianL In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-03 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Why thank yee for the very detailed critique. It helps me out a lot when it comes to bettering my work XD.
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ThePoeticDragon In reply to SymbianL [2013-12-04 05:07:00 +0000 UTC]
All I did was be honest. It was adorable, btw.
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shmostedshmaylo [2013-11-03 19:13:34 +0000 UTC]
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The colors of this piece are so vibrant! Everything from the tree stump, to her hair, to the color of the leaves, to the irises of her eyes have this vibrant hue. It's really fantastic.
Also, I love how you have the perfect shading effect, particularly with shadows. When going from light to dark, or dark to light, they fade from each color wonderfully.
Lastly, I love how you captured the essence of Fluttershy as well. You drew more than just a pony hiding, you got the greatest expression of coyness and shyness into a neat little package.
I would really love to see a drawing on Celestia in a similar fashion. I have a feeling it would be amazing as well!
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SymbianL In reply to shmostedshmaylo [2013-11-04 01:01:34 +0000 UTC]
You sir just made my day XD.
Thank You for the awesome critique :3
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shmostedshmaylo In reply to SymbianL [2013-11-09 06:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, I am a madame, but you are very welcome!
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SymbianL In reply to shmostedshmaylo [2013-12-12 05:18:00 +0000 UTC]
I stand corrected. XD
You madam just made my day... More than a month ago. XD
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SymbianL In reply to TomFraggle [2013-12-11 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]
You'd scare her if you scream though. X3
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TomFraggle In reply to SymbianL [2013-12-14 15:25:55 +0000 UTC]
True. I'll let out a tiny Fluttershy scream then.
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SymbianL In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-03 02:43:38 +0000 UTC]
No! I'll kill you if you die! 0_0
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ThePoeticDragon In reply to SymbianL [2013-12-04 05:08:14 +0000 UTC]
is dead, there is no re-killing of him, he is not awesome enough for that.
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SymbianL In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-12-04 16:35:24 +0000 UTC]
I see... I shall mourn your death. You shall be missed. T_T
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ThatAnnoyingRabbit [2013-11-24 13:27:29 +0000 UTC]
i really dont like MLP but this is too cute to not like lol
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SymbianL In reply to ThatAnnoyingRabbit [2013-11-25 01:01:07 +0000 UTC]
Non-Brony who likes my art. That's something. XD
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General5 In reply to SymbianL [2013-11-23 13:16:30 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. Now for more season 4 Fluttershy!
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AllPoniesPlz [2013-11-17 02:28:47 +0000 UTC]
I like the matte style you add to it. It's different and you make it work well.
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