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Published: 2005-04-02 17:14:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 330; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 89
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Experiment 02: Artificial InstruktureEnjoy, and critique plz!
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i love the colours.and dont mind the white bar,looks good to me.nice work
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maybe if u wanted to hide a piece of the main pic u should have made the white bar like black
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Everyone has an issue with teh bloody white bar! it was there to try and take your attention off the structure itself and view it from dif angle =/
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it's pretty nice work, but I think it's too small
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Nice, I was a little confused at the white stripe but it looks nice otherwise, very industrial looking like a mega-complex or space structure or somthing. Very nice colours too.
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Looks great, but then you see the white bar. Im kinda confused on that. But pretty good other then that.
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The render looks good, but the white bar seems out of place.
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It's too dirty for me. But that just my opinion I don't really like dirty/grunge.
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Not as bad as you last one but much better. But theres to much black. To empty in my opinion.
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too dirty in some places, the concept is cool, but try to make it less experimental, imo
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i'd like to point out that the title is "_experiment 02." making it less experimental is like saying "it's a great piece of art, just try to make it less artistic."
but anyway. my crit.
i like the faint orange lines, they help fill the blackness a little.
the white bar does do a good job of taking the attention off the large piece, because of the difference in color, i assume. i don't really like it much, but i think the piece would be too pain without it, so it's better that it's there.
i like the piece where it seems to be coming apart, or just a wireframe of the structure. but that's my architect side coming out.
overall, i really like it.
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