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Published: 2019-07-14 18:10:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 11534; Favourites: 938; Downloads: 36
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Another style test, I just wanted to see if they'd look good.Any critique would be noice, just making them look more natural or more appealing. ^w^
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The two middle trees on the left aremood
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late criticism on this but why not:
i think the problem with these is that the branches just sort of go into a "mass" of leaves, instead of the crown of the tree actually being an extension of the branches, if that makes sense? if you were to remove the leaves on a tree youd see an extensive network of branches forming the shape of the crown
id say to first study some "naked" trees to fully understand how the network of branches shape the crown, and start by drawing that roughly and then adding the leaves on top. this way itll look more natural rather than treating the crown and the body of the tree as two separate things
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They don't look melted at all to me, save for the middle one. If you want to focus on that style of tree, I would suggests looking at actual trees to study their shape and transcribe it into a cartoony style. Weeping willows would be a good one for that.
Also, I absolutely love that orange tree in the bottom row.
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are.. are they melting? this doesnt really look natural OR appealing, i suggest making it more detailed amd being less lazy on them. make the wood detailed or something like that.
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I love the 7th one omgg the colors and the layering-ness in the back is so pretty.
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I literally can't critique this cuz I suck at drawing trees lol
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Pretty! It reminds me of the fact that trees are as unique as people.
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i would say that u use ref cuzΒ your trees Don't really look very normal some trees look that they would break or some look melted so maybe use a ref
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im disappointed i donut see a lil' bob ross happy tree.
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It aint just you :0
Im gettin mega slime rancher vibes
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Father Bob Ross would be proud of all the happy little trees you drew
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I think the 7th tree should look less slimy, maybe the 8th tree too
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The third one middle row is my favorite! They're all amazing tho
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This style reminds me of Adventure Time idk why lmao
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this style fits very well w/ the rest of your stuff! Now, if you want them more natural you wanna add more branches, and shading that gives a better depth to the leaves! Now, if you want personality in the trees and wanna keep it simple, these look great! Of course, roots are also something important and can add a lot if done right!! <3
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One of the trees remind me of Fluttershy
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maybe use shadows to define more areas in the natural color where clusters of leaves are
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I think their perfect for your style. They would go very well in a natural background. I think you should test that,no characters,just a natural background,like a forest,river,a mountain.Β
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It would look cool if you drew one that is like a cube, another one that is like a triangle and another one that is like a circle,, i mean it wouldnt be realistic but, again, it would look cool idk
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I love the diversity. If you want, maybe find a cool way to add bark? Or make them textured? My art teacher made me draw a tree before, then make vertical-semi vertical lines in it, squiggly kind of lines, to make an interesting looking tree. Maybe try that? It would take a while if you drew them like that in your comic, but still. ^^β
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Whoops didnβt mean to replyΒ www.deviantart.com/rosehasflooβ¦
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NOIC. If your going for more realistic trees, I suggest trying to draw more trees with more branches, otherwise that's a really cool design!
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Thank you, Cynthia, this will help me later on
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