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Published: 2014-05-29 08:36:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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This one needs adjusting, but I'm putting it up here for the moment.Anialya Daelos, while awaiting her trial. Faeblight, Rift.
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Okay I've been doing linearts for a bit now and I see that this could heavily benefit from varied lineweights. (Unless you plan to completely replace in painting) How the head is fitting with the neck onto the shoulders should be revisited, look at some stock or yourself in the mirror and study how things work there. The fingers don't seem to be resting on the hand very well, its as if they are held out awkwardly for no reason. The overall figure seems very masculine as well, I wish I had shoulders that broad.
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Thank you! I'll twiddle with the lineart a bit.
I hadn't paid much attention to the fingers, they're always a hated point for me. Now that I know which points look odd, I cam work on fixing them!
Gives me something to work with! Cheers for the feedback!
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