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Published: 2010-07-18 23:03:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description This is a work in process any constructive criticism is welcome, I just want to get better at what I enjoy. This is a sketch of a character from the game champions online.
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Comments: 4

Mechanical-Dragon [2010-07-19 06:02:02 +0000 UTC]

This is really good! The amount of detail you put into him and his costume is amazing. He has a definite sense of depth and curves, and the mixture of hard form and draping fabric looks great.

His front hand looks great, strong and well defined, with good shape. However, his back arm seems a little short and the hand holding his sword seems almost tacked on. I believe that it is because his fingers don't follow the curve of the hilt.

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Systems-Error In reply to Mechanical-Dragon [2010-07-19 13:12:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah I had real trouble with the back hand. To be honest it came out better in pencil but I made some mistakes with the inking that I just had to roll with. It's all about practice though eh thanks for the feedback. I thought you would be the first to get back to me

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Mechanical-Dragon In reply to Systems-Error [2010-07-22 07:57:14 +0000 UTC]

I hate when I mess up inking, it's just so frustrating to get that far and make a mistake!

It's good to see you drawing again!

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Systems-Error In reply to Mechanical-Dragon [2010-07-22 08:38:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah it's really good to b back. I have some sketches I'm still working on so when I get them done I'll put them up so keep your eyes peeled.

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