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Gogeta gets it on!



UPDATE 18/06/10: I did some adjustments according to some criticism I received and I went and uploaded a bigger size.
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Comments: 22

KevinBeaver [2016-11-07 07:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Check out my Dragon Ball manga I'm doing. Great stuff!

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BlitzTroopa [2010-05-31 00:17:24 +0000 UTC]

He should say "Lend me YOUR energy!" You forgot to put on the r

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T-R-L In reply to BlitzTroopa [2010-05-31 00:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thanks, but I know. I should get around to fixing that sometime.

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sonPauten [2010-01-17 23:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow! None Super Saiyan Gogeta. Nice!

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T-R-L In reply to sonPauten [2010-01-18 00:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. You could also call him... normal Gogeta

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sonPauten In reply to T-R-L [2010-01-18 01:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Base Gogeta would also be appropriate. XD

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DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-08 21:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice inking once again, not much to say about this page, other than that it's great. Especially the last panel - speedlines are one of the reasons I'd never be able to do a manga traditionaly. I'm to lazy to draw them...

Oh and... this page also needs some more sound words. But maybe it's just me after all. I love those thingies. ^^

Overall an interesting manga. I'm curious to know what that thing heading for earth is. It can't be an ordinary meteor, right? That would be anticlimactic....
Were you ever planing on continuing this story?

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-08 21:30:44 +0000 UTC]

It's a mysterious ball of danger!

Yeah I'm continuing. I have 30 some pencil pages catching dust somewhere. Need to start inking again! I'll try to upload the ones I have inked.
Thanks for your great comments btw.

And yeah speedlines sure are a pain in the ass.

Where would you put extra sound words in this page?

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-09 18:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Well then, I'm curious to see what's up with this mysterious ball of danger.

And I'd have put soundwords in the second panel and the last panel. Well, actually the last can do without, it's already effective enough.

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-09 18:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the second one I can agree. But what would you write for the last? What's making the sound?

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-09 21:38:46 +0000 UTC]

I figured that there mustn't always be a sound - sometimes a sound effect word just indicates that some kind of action is taking place. In this case Gogeta putting up his hands to form the Genki Dama. And I'd probably write something like wupp or wopp or swupp or just ssst. As I said, it's not necessairy, it would just function to put even more importance on the movement.

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-09 22:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Ow I see. Yeah I guess you're right. I'll take all of this in consideration when inking my next pages. I really feel like doing some now! =]

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-10 15:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Well then, make the best of your high spirits!

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-10 17:22:06 +0000 UTC]

I am! Expect some uploads later this night!

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-10 22:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Great!

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-10 22:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm busy on it now. Can you tell me a good font for the dialogue text?

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-10 22:48:29 +0000 UTC]

I'd suggest trying some of these: [link] Komika text is the most useful of these for dialogue. I'm using Komika Text Kaps.

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T-R-L In reply to DeadlyChestnut [2009-12-10 22:52:57 +0000 UTC]

I found one on blambot. Crimefighter bb. I like it. Hope it works with the manga.

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DeadlyChestnut In reply to T-R-L [2009-12-10 23:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Looks cool! Most fonts at blambot don't feature additional characters though, like Γ€Γ„ΓΆΓ–ΓΌΓœ etc... That's why I don't use them for dialogue as I'm also writing the comic in German.

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AnimationNation08 [2009-11-07 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Whats DBHS. i thought the new manga was AF.

Is this just ur little version of a new manga??

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T-R-L In reply to AnimationNation08 [2009-11-07 11:31:43 +0000 UTC]

dragonball hs is my manga yes. It's as much official as AF is... not.

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AnimationNation08 In reply to T-R-L [2009-11-07 19:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok.

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