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Boring intro page is boring, but you'll get through it.
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Comments: 26
InfamousWolf [2015-06-01 02:47:24 +0000 UTC]
I would buy this, If printed i would so buy this. I love the writing i love the art.
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Wolved [2012-06-18 18:20:59 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Finally the first page! :3 I'm excited to see the next one, I like the background. It gives a sort of open feel to the page, and it almost feels as if the page is... absorbing the reader? x) I don't know how to put it, but it's great!
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T0xicEye In reply to Wolved [2012-06-19 10:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah, couldn't have put it better. THe whole first part of the prologue is meant to give this kinda feeling. So naturaly a space-like background was perfect for it.
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Wolved In reply to T0xicEye [2012-06-19 16:18:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I put it well enough. And yes, it is. I probably wouldn't have thought to do that, if I were to try and give off that feeling. Great job!
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Dajhira-Jo [2012-06-17 14:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Grammar Nazi: strengTh and strEwn :3
Its a quote that gives a person the initiative to think deep thoughts. ;D This is great, it really gives you some insight before you turn the page.
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T0xicEye In reply to Dajhira-Jo [2012-06-17 15:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, someone else already pointed the strength part out. Apperantly I have trouble writing words with -th correctly.
The "strown" isn't a typo. It's a quote from "The Kasîdah of Hâjî Abdû El-Yezdî" and written like Sir Richard Burton wrote it. So I used it exactly like he wrote it. (honestly, besides the fact that he really wrote it like that, I totally didn't see it before you pointed it out. I guess he mistyped it on purpose for the rhyme. You can read it here: [link] )
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CahjesaalLesou-n [2012-06-17 14:15:31 +0000 UTC]
wow. We kannst du so was langweilig nennen?? das ist der wahnsinn. Ich sterbe vor spannung fast.
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T0xicEye In reply to CahjesaalLesou-n [2012-06-17 15:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Schön das es gefällt. Hoffe es wird nicht enttäuschend werden. Der Proloug ist nicht so interessant am Anfang.
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Northildr [2012-06-17 13:30:35 +0000 UTC]
Nix boring intro page xD. Vielmehr man-fällt-vor-spannung-fast-von-der-stuhlkante-intro page.
Auch: schöne Quotes. Enthalten sehr viel Wahrheit.
~Tav
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T0xicEye In reply to Northildr [2012-06-17 15:37:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh mai, dann hoffe ich mal, dass ich niemanden enttäusche. Zugegeben, der Prolouge ist nicht alzu interessant. Muss aber sein um später in der Story die Zusammenhänge zu verstehen.
Ich konnte einfach keine einzelnen Zitate finden, die passten. Also habe ich mehrere genommen. Jede passte auf ihre Weise.
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Northildr In reply to T0xicEye [2012-06-17 15:41:14 +0000 UTC]
Mach dir nicht soviele Gedanken :3. Wird schon werden <3.
Und Prologe sind immer ne Qual. Als Leser hat man die in einem Rutsch durch, aber als Autor hat man daran meist keinen Spaß. Wenn ich nur an Unicurse denke... o kotz.
Im Ernst, die erwecken den Anschein als kämen sie aus ein und derselben Feder ^^.
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HowlingSpirit34 [2012-06-17 13:00:56 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! The wording is spectacular! Two errors. You spelled Strength, Strenght. Unless it's a word I have not heard of. XD But these quotes are beautiful, and I am excited to see more! C:
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T0xicEye In reply to HowlingSpirit34 [2012-06-17 15:35:23 +0000 UTC]
And here I was sure I proofread it often enough. Fixed it.
Well, it is mostly a collection of dofferent quotes with a bit of my own thrown in (you could say I am the unknown source I mentioned below the quotes).
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HowlingSpirit34 In reply to T0xicEye [2012-06-17 17:30:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha. It's not easy making a comic without spell check. Lol. When I tried mine, kept pointing out my mistakes. Lol.
I see! :3 Are they various one's your learned, or did you do research on them to find them?
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T0xicEye In reply to HowlingSpirit34 [2012-06-19 10:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Especially if the language you're writing in isn't your first language. But watch out, I just make as many grammatical and spelling error in my mother's tongue.
Mostly researched, since I have a bad memory and never had much interest in old literature (although I do like a few of the old ones you have to read in school . Always felt out of place, since it seemed I was the only one enjoying them.) Also, some of the literature is english and I hardly got to read old english literature.
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HowlingSpirit34 In reply to T0xicEye [2012-06-19 13:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Really? Wow! It seems as if it were your first language! And if you don't mind, what is it? I have always been interested in different languages, only because I wanna learn more than one. XD
I always have been interested in strong quotes like that. They just seem, rather, i dunno how to put it. But, interesting! I also enjoy reading them, so your not the only one!
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TC13021983 [2012-06-17 12:40:46 +0000 UTC]
Bis auf den Part mit dem Glauben ist der Text einfach genial ^^ Hat auch son bissle Wahrheitsgehalt.
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T0xicEye In reply to TC13021983 [2012-06-17 12:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, der Glaube Part ist auch nicht mein Favorit, aber ich wollte unbedingt was mit Glaube drinhaben (Loyalty-Courage-Faith). Es ist aber auch verdammt schwer gute Zitate zu finden und ich selber bin nicht alzu kreativ dadrin.
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