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Published: 2016-07-30 01:27:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1238; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 1
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Description This is going to be my new favorite OC, and  therefore my primary CPOC.

I don't know what to name her, I was thinking Mindfuck or Dreamy or something, probably gonna  stick with Dreamy.



Real Name: Melanie Jensen Martina
Age: 22
Ethnicity: Latina-American
Status: Deceased
Species: Succubus, Dreamwalker
Nickname: Dreamy
Date of birth: January 14th, 1994
Sex: Female
Current lives in: Savannah, Georgia
Current Residence: Apartment, which she never leaves during the day.
 

Relationships:

Partner: None
Father: In prison
Mother: deceased, died when she was born
Step Mother: Lives in New York City, New York.
Siblings: none.
Lives with: none

Physical Description:

Height: 5 feet, 2.5 inches.
Weight: 135 lbs.
Tattoo(s): Satan's Mark (tramp stamp area)
Scar(s): None
Piercings: studs in her ears.
Notable features: Her tail and horns.
Physical Strengths: None
Physical Weaknesses: Long term exposure to sunlight.

About Her:
Personality: Lustful, nasty, rude, egotistical.
Notable Features: She's a heavy drinker, she is a drug user, she is reasonably lazy, and she is known to be a slut.
Likes: Jack and Coke, cocaine, heroine, sexual pleasure, being alone, music, herself.
Dislikes: Being threatened, liars, people not listening to her, failing, any mention of religion.

Skills:

Strength: 3.5/10
Intellect: 6/10
Athleticism: 5/10
Speed: 3.5/10
Agility: 4.5/10


Motive: She kills to collect souls for Satan (no, she is not a Satanist)
Cause of Death: Bullet to the  head, broken ribs. Initial autopsy found heroin in her system, though this had nothing to do with her death.

How She Kills: Melanie will analyze her target for at least 2 days, and find their schedule. From there, she will enter their mind as they sleep to fuck with them. She uses things she pulls from their memory to use against them most of the time, and they will die  when they awake. However, most times she will engage in sexual activities in the dream before killing them in their dream, which will cause their body to shut down, therefore death will ensue. 

Brief Backstory: Melanie was born on January 14th, 1994 to a father. Unfortunately, her mother had heart problems, and died in childbirth. Her father was a drug dealer, and was not married to Melanie's mother, so he simply went and moved on a year after Melanie's birth to another woman. Melanie grew up in Piedmont, Georgia, and did not have a stable childhood. She  was an only child. Her father and 'stepmother' were bot drug addicts, and her father was a prominent drug dealer. Melanie never went to school formally, her father and stepmother taught her basic things, like speech, mathematics, and street smarts. When she was 16, her father was  caught and arrested. Her stepmother managed to evade being charged. By this age, Melanie was in  the drug game, and was a user of heroine and cocaine. At 22 years of age, she was involved in a drug deal, where the customer did not have the correct amount of money. Melanie tried to pull a gun on them, but herself and two of her cartel friends were shot. She was the only one to die. When she  died, she went to Hell, and pleaded with Satan to restore her life. She signed a contract with him, promising that he would restore her life as long as she collected souls of sinners. The contract was signed when he burned his symbol into her lower back, which was excruciatingly painful. With that, she came back. Her new body was practically the same, even wearing the same clothes that she wore when she was murdered, but her  skin was a pale violet color, she had horns and a tail, as well as the mark Satan left on her. Here eyes had gone from a bright hazel to a deep red with blackened whites of them. Her teeth had become fangs, and her tongue was elongated and forked.


She does not engage in hand to hand combat, only psychological damage.



I'm still working on her, so if you have any criticism, questions, or comments, those would be greatly appreciated! 

If you would like to draw her, you may, just be sure to credit me!
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Comments: 35

Sukii1 [2021-06-26 21:23:17 +0000 UTC]

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Sukii1 [2021-06-26 21:22:47 +0000 UTC]

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EchoScreams [2016-11-13 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]

i really like it :0 
she's well balanced and has a cute but fitting design, 
The personality really compliments her appearance
all i have to say is that there is a few missing letters and spelling errors here and there but all together i love it

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t33th-ch4n In reply to EchoScreams [2016-11-14 00:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And yeah, I forget to fix it sometimes XP

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EchoScreams In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-11-15 10:37:13 +0000 UTC]

its fine, i cant spell very well either tbh 

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GriffinSkrill [2016-08-27 10:14:58 +0000 UTC]

She is so pretty!!!

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t33th-ch4n In reply to GriffinSkrill [2016-08-27 14:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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GriffinSkrill In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-08-27 15:40:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!!

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SkylerWillKillFans [2016-08-20 23:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I love this OC! Its quite great and amazing!

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t33th-ch4n In reply to SkylerWillKillFans [2016-08-21 00:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks!

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SkylerWillKillFans In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-08-21 00:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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Brittanybeepeace2016 [2016-08-19 15:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Ooo such interesting OC! This is the first time a OC lives in Georgia  Nice work!

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t33th-ch4n In reply to Brittanybeepeace2016 [2016-08-19 15:52:47 +0000 UTC]

XD ty!

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Brittanybeepeace2016 In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-08-19 16:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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JustATobi [2016-08-14 13:29:17 +0000 UTC]

cool oc x3

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t33th-ch4n In reply to JustATobi [2016-08-14 13:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Ty!

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JustATobi In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-08-14 13:43:59 +0000 UTC]

np x3
do you want to rp?

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t33th-ch4n In reply to JustATobi [2016-08-14 13:53:42 +0000 UTC]

I can't rn, maybe later

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JustATobi In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-08-14 13:54:09 +0000 UTC]

ok ^^ tell me when or send me a note ^^

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IvyDarkRose [2016-07-30 01:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Hey can you not use pentagram as the opposite of what it actually is. 

If you want to use satan's mark: i0.wp.com/freedumbpeoplemagazi…


this here is what one looks like. 

or this one: upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia…

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t33th-ch4n In reply to IvyDarkRose [2016-07-30 01:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'm gonna change it, that was just a placeholder

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IvyDarkRose In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 01:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that makes sense 0u0

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JenJinx27 [2016-07-30 01:42:35 +0000 UTC]

She looks cool ^^

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t33th-ch4n In reply to JenJinx27 [2016-07-30 01:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JenJinx27 In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 01:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Nope problem

Do you think her and my oc Molly will get along? o:
pinkwolfly.deviantart.com/art/…

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t33th-ch4n In reply to JenJinx27 [2016-07-30 01:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Possibly, yeah!

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FishTacoSenpai [2016-07-30 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]

noiceeeeee

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t33th-ch4n In reply to FishTacoSenpai [2016-07-30 01:39:23 +0000 UTC]

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FishTacoSenpai In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 02:34:45 +0000 UTC]

^u^ 
u wanna rp over skype?

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t33th-ch4n In reply to FishTacoSenpai [2016-07-30 02:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm livetsreaming rn so I cant m8

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FishTacoSenpai In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 02:37:05 +0000 UTC]

oh kk m8 :333

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t33th-ch4n In reply to FishTacoSenpai [2016-07-30 02:37:27 +0000 UTC]

:3

u wanna come?

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FishTacoSenpai In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 02:38:20 +0000 UTC]

im on Recolor.me rn trying to get alot of free shat rn XDDD some other times

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t33th-ch4n In reply to FishTacoSenpai [2016-07-30 02:39:31 +0000 UTC]

aw rip

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FishTacoSenpai In reply to t33th-ch4n [2016-07-30 02:40:14 +0000 UTC]

it will be ok QAQ im getting so much free shat

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