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Published: 2004-10-02 05:18:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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So many things,I think I know.
So I add to my list,
Just one thing more.
"Look before you leap,"
I'm told time and time again.
I don't know what I'm looking for,
So I'll just keep leaping, then.
It hurts more not to leap-
To just stare up at the wall.
But never when I leap,
Do I know just where I will fall.
There's the devil you know,
And the demons you don't.
There'll be pain when you go,
But more when you won't.
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hey!
I dunno what ur talking about, i like this poem. ^_^
~ariyana
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thanks.^^
But when I read it, it just doesn't seem to flow. Each stanza sounds good on its own, but together they just don't work.
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