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Description
Name: Min KellyAlso known as: M
Nicknames: Lilly (bro only)
Age: 24
Gender: Female
DOB: August 19
Species: Human
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Heartbroken
Occupation: Robber
Weapons: Body (muscle)
Family:
-Len (lenny) Kelly (dead)
-Mother (dead)
-Father (unknown)
Likes:
-wrestling
-the color(s) blue & purple
-Children (like a mother)
-English accents
-robbing
-getting revenge
Hates:
-idiots
-face being touched
-forced into things
-past
-fire
-others bring up her brother
Fears:
-past
-people knowing the real her
-stitches
Personality:
-threatening
-Fearless
-Aggressive
-boyish
-naive
-careless
-Protective
-Criminal
-Patient
-Passive
Height: 6'7"
Definitive Feature(s): Scar across the face burned into her skin, burn new skin (off colored)
Back story: story in progress
Back back story
Story of Elian
(This is a continuation of the stuff in the links)
He did his normal stuff he loved cooking. Meanwhile with Min while she was wrestling a crocodile but at this time of age 20 she is 6'7", anyways she got distracted and gotten bit around her mid face (where the 'stitching' look on her face). It was so bad after they got her off the had to get her stitches. Her brother worried when he got the call and what has happened went to her. After all that patch up stuff. Min was cooking for her brother this time as he had a fever. She had oil going. Some people who had a grunge on her cause she like destroyed their life by out beating them so they made sure the oil went to flames into her open window when she went to get something in the fridge. When it hit hot oil which did cause a stir, bursting into flames. Min who got startled by the smoke alarms she hit her head hard on the top of the fridge and caused her to stumble. She blinks a lot as black smoke already filled the place. She coughed. she went to get he brother. She open the door to his room. He wasn't doing so well. She gets him out but because the fire was spreading to fast as the house was old and had wood in many places. She got them out the window but which cause the traction with the outside air and the fire air causing an explosion. Min did get burned only on the side of her stitching. They got rushed to hopsital, Len didn't make it. He died as Min survived but the stitching melted into her skin. She snapped. Losing her mother, fiancee, then her brother. She thought well if life want to fuck me in the ass that much. Screw it, lets see how far i can go.
Abilities/strengths: can sleep hold someone pretty quickly and can tie them up fast
Weakness: anything (is human)
Other Facts:
Voice - www.youtube.com/watch?v=4G0pfm… (with a Australian accent)
Theme - tba
Hair color - Brown (dyed pastel purple)
always has a knife and gun is in her back pocket
younger self - taby-crazykat.deviantart.com/a…
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Comments: 5
I saw this character and how you wanted some critique.
my critique would be that you don't really go into describing her personality, just listing traits. I know it can be tough to do that
but I can't really see anything to critique there, due to it being a list.
But Aggressiveness and Patience is kind of a contradiction, unless she act differently toward different people.
At some point you may fix that but at the moment its a little bit of a contradiction because aggressive people tend to be
pushy and/or forceful which is opposite to patience. Again not much to critique there.
But I did find that your back story is worded very oddly in the grammar department.
I recommend reading over it again and fixing it or having someone else help out with that.
There are also some points where you don't describe certain things.
Example 1: at one point you say, "Len wasn't very up to that for the first few months." What exactly was he not up for?
Example 2: You say, "Some people who had a grunge on her cause she like destroyed their life by out beating them so they made sure the oil went to flames into her open window when she went to get something in the fridge. When it hit hot oil which did cause a stir, bursting into flames."
What hit the oil? Also this is one of the many lines that need to be looked over for typos and grammatical errors.
You also mention she lost her fiancee. When did she have one? No where in the back story or your back back story was this ever mentioned. It kind of seems like it was just added to give her more loved ones who have passed.
(also you can just add the back back story to the description of this deviation. Unless you don't have it there for a reason than never mind)
That's about it. I personally like the drawing, though it would look nicer with some shading 
story is in progress.
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Ah thank you!
This helped alot.
and her fiancee is the guy named Elian. (all about that is in Story of Elian)
But i understand where your coming from.
Ill be fixing up things when i have time but the things pointed out Actually made me open up to the errors.
With the oil still looking up things that could cause a big fire.
(there was a reason as someone said only 500 ord max to get checked)
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Ok I see. I was wondering why the back back story had the name Elian.
As for the fire, may I suggest a molotov cocktail? It is something people use to vandalize out of murderous intent
and it can be tossed into a window.
I'm glad I could help
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haha yeah
Oh that is a good idea. Thanks for the idea. that make alot more sense than what i thought
its really appreciated
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Cool. good luck with your story, I think you have a great character!
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