HOME | DD
TacoDao — Denied- I
Published: 2009-04-04 06:10:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 311; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
Redirect to original
Description
Comment this if you cannot read my messy hand writing!Name: Denied
Amount of Pages: 3 or 4
Pairing: XemSaï ( Xemnas Saïx )
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Other: This is just practice. Critisism would be loved and even more appreciated then 'Daaaaaaaw poor Saïx!' or 'Ooh its so Kawaii!!!1!!one!' and so on and so forth. I know its messy- thats why this is PRACTICE. I want to get better at drawing: comics, KH, their hair style- through this. This isn't a spoiler because they all actualy die... me and my big mouth. I don't know much of KH scenery or ( sorta ) how they act.
*Don't own no characters P:
Related content
Comments: 6
Pfft. He totally has ah heart. xD
Umm... The dimple, cheek, thing, I've never known what to call it... It's too big. C: It looks like it could almost be a bump that was given to them by someone slamming a brick into the side of their cheek.
*nods* Otherwise, your art is adorable as ever. <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Alright I'll practice on the cheeks. Anything else?? I really want to improve on my artwork :\
Thankies :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Pfft, nah. C: I've always liked your art -- The only stupid things I'd tell you to edit is to get rid of the starting out base lines and to make the pages look more manga like by inking it in. xD
[inking in can also only mean tracing it over with pen. C:]
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I'll try that too on the next one :< [ i know i know x3 ]
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sorry, In this trait I'm a lot like my sister -- Sorry. 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Daaaw tis ohkay :3 its good help C: [ pssh! LoL ]
👍: 0 ⏩: 0