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Published: 2006-06-01 18:01:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 617; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 22
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Description Forever Sinking
    That's how I feel
Forever Dreaming
    It's all to real
Never Knowing
    How I feel
It's a never ending escape

Tell you now
    I'll never know
How you feel
    It never showed
Though I'm cursed
    With the same
You know nothing of the pain

The endless blue
    It stretches on
It's always true
    Never wrong
And yet I'm faulted
    For the feeling
Lonleyness lives within me

I still wish
    To tell you now
But it's too late
    For me to skowl
Please forgive me
    For this reeling
But now I'm here, Forever Sinking
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Comments: 28

XxRedRibbonxX [2006-06-16 00:58:22 +0000 UTC]

It's a tae-song! And a melancholy one at that. TT_TT Combined with your picture of you in the rain it's really really sad- at least you have Sulfur to cheer you up. <3 And the writing isn't terrible at all!

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KariganSophia [2006-06-07 20:11:56 +0000 UTC]

how sad! hey, can you let me in on a little secret? can you tell me how you got your author tag up? that would be great! sorry, I really did like your poem ^^

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tae- In reply to KariganSophia [2006-06-08 04:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh um...the picture thing? Sure, no problem! *just found out too *

Up at the top of the page, click there should be 3 choices: Journal - Profile - Settings. Click on profile, and "Literature Author Tag" should be right underneath where you can change your avatar! I hope that helps!

And thank you! 'tis no trouble at all!

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KariganSophia In reply to tae- [2006-06-08 19:25:04 +0000 UTC]

I got it, so no worries, thanks anyway

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lateralsnowflake [2006-06-05 07:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is good poetry. The message behind it conveys feeling, something I seek (and fail) to do on multiple occasions.

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lateralsnowflake In reply to lateralsnowflake [2006-06-05 21:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Bleh. Probably the best poem I've managed to come out with so far is Smoking Muse. I haven't written anything worth its salt in a while, actually.

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tae- In reply to lateralsnowflake [2006-06-05 20:31:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you, but i bet you do a heck of a lot better than i can! owo

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iceytina [2006-06-03 02:43:49 +0000 UTC]

wow! No WONDER I gave up trying to rhyme. :clings: ur soo good at this! T.T it's so perfect and beautiful! The type of tragic love I try to write as prose.

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Paran0id42 [2006-06-01 22:16:18 +0000 UTC]

POETRYYYYYY! . XD

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tae- In reply to Paran0id42 [2006-06-02 06:25:57 +0000 UTC]

MEEEEP!

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silverdragon27 [2006-06-01 20:51:20 +0000 UTC]

TT_____TT awww...*pats head*

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tae- In reply to silverdragon27 [2006-06-02 06:28:50 +0000 UTC]

meeeep...*wags tail*

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silverdragon27 In reply to tae- [2006-06-02 16:53:29 +0000 UTC]

*pounces*

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PreciousAngelWings [2006-06-01 20:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's really sad... not really depressing though. Still very good! ^^ very cute picture too!

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tae- In reply to PreciousAngelWings [2006-06-02 06:29:45 +0000 UTC]

you...you don't think so? OwO THANK YOU!

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PreciousAngelWings In reply to tae- [2006-06-02 21:27:07 +0000 UTC]

no not really. but it's not a bad thing ^^ You're Welcome!

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PyrosMerra [2006-06-01 18:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww!!! OwO~ *dies* Its better than I could do x.x~

Sulfur: Nuuu!! Dun be sad !! Nicole...*clingcuddles* o-o;~

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tae- In reply to PyrosMerra [2006-06-01 18:40:49 +0000 UTC]

It is so not! *clings*

I-I'm not sad! It just...came out sad....TT^TT I'm sorry...

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PyrosMerra In reply to tae- [2006-06-01 18:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Sulfur: *cuddles* Just as long as you're not sad...*<3*

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tae- In reply to PyrosMerra [2006-06-01 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]

*purrs* nope! it takes a lot to get me sad

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PyrosMerra In reply to tae- [2006-06-01 19:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Sulfur: Hooray! *feeds cherry pie*

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tae- In reply to PyrosMerra [2006-06-01 20:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Its so...good...o///o~))

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PyrosMerra In reply to tae- [2006-06-01 20:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Sulfur: *purrs* Teh...pie...~<3 *feeds another slice*

Pie for my Ni-san
As I do know the cherry
Makes her feel happy

Haikus! XD

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tae- In reply to PyrosMerra [2006-06-02 06:30:50 +0000 UTC]

OwO *drools*

HAAAAPPPPYYYYY! *flails on teh floor*

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PyrosMerra In reply to tae- [2006-06-02 07:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Sulfur: *chuckles and pets head* Want more?~

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DarthTella [2006-06-01 18:09:01 +0000 UTC]

so sad...

yet cool!

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tae- In reply to DarthTella [2006-06-01 18:11:08 +0000 UTC]

haha, its sad, I can't write for the life of me

but thank you

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DarthTella In reply to tae- [2006-06-01 18:22:39 +0000 UTC]

no probs

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