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Published: 2016-02-07 22:32:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2756; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Don't worry soon he calms down and they have a talk like normal peoplefor pernaldo bomb day one.
"Day 1 (2/7): Meeting
How did they meet? What happened when they did? After all, Ronaldo’s been a fan of Peridot since he saw her on TV!"
not too creative but *shrug* also I feel like I use text on my art work too often :/perinaldo-activity.tumblr.com/…
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Good aww or bad aww ?
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Cute Awww
Feels bad for poor Peri.
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Yea she didn't have fun in most of my pics
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I saws the spanking.
And the banana.
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how about this one? fav.me/d9u2ik7
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hehe ._. it is what happens to my favorite characters. Pearl is actually my favorite but for some reason I dont enjoy abusing her so it falls to Peri, my second fave
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I abuse Pearl a lot. Peridot and Pearl are pretty much equal imo and Back to the Barn was like omf Pearl said it herself they're equal but Pearl is like my abuse character.
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pearl idk her life already sucks so bad I feel bad if I mess with her too much
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From the Tagline Word is star.
Which is also the logo on Steven's shirt doubles him being that for the show itself obviously
So the text is legible and the color coding makes it easy to see who is speaking. Also the poses do in fact fit the dialogue...more so in Peridot's case...poor Gem. 
A suggestion I'll like to make is to consider adding the temples of Roland's glasses. Although this is merely just a tad realistic thing for consideration. [Clement doesn't for example i.ytimg.com/vi/KVQ4Nm_ip_U/max… So that is down to preference.
Looks to be a bit text heavy, maybe have this scene split into a [3]4koma format to emphasize each reaction in it's own panel? The text also could be made smaller, but keep in mind the left to right top to bottom format for reading clarity. Pardon if Mario's not your thing, but this is an example. Seven Star Comics 52
Overall very sweet artwork of Steven defending his new friend...from his other friend.
Hope this comment gives some insight. Thanks for joining the tag!
Your word is Black for zthesoi
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yes this is a good choice for the word star :3
Im glad it is easy to read and the color coding is actually an idea I got from homestuck and use a lot now , it's just so darn convenient! As for the beach I enjoy drawing it, the setting of the show is one of the things that makes me like it so much.
Thank you for the comment and the suggestions you offered!
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Aww, that's so cute! I can totally see that happening!
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We both can see it happening!
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thank you
I feel like it was unoriginal but I think this is how it'd go
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I though it was great.
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