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TakemaKei — under the tree

Published: 2012-01-16 16:36:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 5
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background practice.
cityscape is evil. even trees are better.

when I was painting the tree, it wasn't so bad, but when i look at it this morning it looks like a broccoli. XD
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Comments: 19

Nyanamo [2012-11-09 19:29:51 +0000 UTC]

hmm..this would be good if the lighting wasn't too heavy. The clouds look like Rain clouds due to the heavy shading O.O I would suggest toning the shades down since the clouds aren't exactly over her. They are far away so the shading would not be as obvious. Also the city is far away as well. Make a layer on top of that and use the watercolor tool to give the effect of aerial perspective! :3

overall this is a pretty good drawing.

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TakemaKei In reply to Nyanamo [2012-11-09 21:40:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks for feedback

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Shardanic [2012-05-05 01:45:12 +0000 UTC]

ooo, those clouds and lighting effects. Nicely done

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TakemaKei In reply to Shardanic [2012-05-05 02:33:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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m-a-c-h-o [2012-03-29 13:22:40 +0000 UTC]

That's really well coloured! you're very good at this..

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TakemaKei In reply to m-a-c-h-o [2012-03-29 14:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Cacophonical [2012-01-20 09:54:44 +0000 UTC]

The shadow effect from the tree is very nicely done, and those clouds are amazing! The overall image is quite serene but a little bit on the dark side (that is, it looks as though it could rain soon - maybe that was what you were going for though. If not, more suggestion of sunlight could help).

The city does also look a bit...erm...lopsided. I have to say that's what I first noticed in this picture.

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TakemaKei In reply to Cacophonical [2012-01-20 10:39:05 +0000 UTC]

yea. probably need a little bit more sunlight, and less clouds. i originally was going for hot midday-ish, but yea it looks like it will rain (different ppl different opinion indeed)

i didnt notice about the city when i paint it. will take note.

Thanks for the feedback~

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Wendychi [2012-01-20 08:37:06 +0000 UTC]

I think you did a perfect job on the tree and grass ;w;

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TakemaKei In reply to Wendychi [2012-01-20 08:52:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks. could have done more though.

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Wendychi In reply to TakemaKei [2012-01-20 14:32:42 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean more?

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TakemaKei In reply to Wendychi [2012-01-20 14:49:54 +0000 UTC]

could have done better i meant.

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Wendychi In reply to TakemaKei [2012-01-20 15:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see.

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theunknown1 [2012-01-18 07:23:52 +0000 UTC]

This looks fantastic ! I love the amount of detail you put into the city. The shadow from the tree looks a little big compared to the space its leaves take up. This is still really good, though ^_^!!

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TakemaKei In reply to theunknown1 [2012-01-18 07:37:38 +0000 UTC]

you're right. it does look big @.@
thanks

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theunknown1 In reply to TakemaKei [2012-01-18 07:57:54 +0000 UTC]

It's not bad or glaring in any way, at least .
You're welcome !

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LoveSoup [2012-01-17 13:09:56 +0000 UTC]

i like XDD
nice shadows from the tree owo
one thing is I think the cityscape should be going horizontally?

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godeyes In reply to LoveSoup [2012-02-24 03:47:29 +0000 UTC]

well not necessarily it could have been shot at a crazy angle

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TakemaKei In reply to LoveSoup [2012-01-17 13:15:55 +0000 UTC]

the tree looks like broccoli XD
yea probably. and it looks so messy. that is about an hour and a half/two hours of work.

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