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Takeuchi15 — Walking With Strangers - 03
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Published: 2019-11-08 21:32:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1490; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 1
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Good work in general. I'm guessing now that the long arms are an artistic choice as many of these characters have irregular features.
If her having irregular features is intended that's okay. However I might still suggest using arrows from your dialogue boxes more often. Granted when there's only one person in frame they're not necessary, and sometimes it technically doesn't matter who said a particular thing, but it's still best not to be mysterious about something like, whose talking I think.
Still got to admire the art though. Hope this continues.
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Thanks for the feedback, I guess this was indeed a problem in this page in particular that
I didnt noticed while making it, I'm allowing myself to be really experimental in the first pages
of this comic so I'm still figuring out hows the best way to draw the panels for now
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I've only ever seen one different take on text box attribution in the early stages of a comic. Some artists take the primary color of their character and match it to the color of the text- but to be honest, that would probably only work with a limited cast. - which you seem to have, so if you want to experiment, maybe do that- course you would have to do color comics.
I have seen font changes but you really need to set up a character pretty well for us to know whose talking by font.
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